The Counsel Of Agastya Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AA BB CC DD EE FF G HH I JJ KK GG CC LL MM BB I NO LL

'Pleased am I ' so spake Agastya 'in these forests dark and wildA
Thou hast come to seek me Rama with the saintly Janak's childA
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But like pale and drooping blossom severed from the parent treeB
Far from home in toil and trouble faithful Sita follows theeB
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True to wedded lord and husband she hath followed Raghu's sonC
With a woman's deep devotion woman's duty she hath doneC
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How unlike the fickle woman true while Fame and Fortune smileD
Faithless when misfortunes gather loveless in her wicked wileD
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How unlike the changeful woman false as light the lightnings flingE
Keen as sabre quick as tempest swift as bird upon its wingE
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Dead to Fortune's frown or favour Sita still in truth abidesF
As the star of Arundhati in her mansion still residesF
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Rest thee with thy gentle consort farther still she may not roamG
Holier were this hermit's forest as the saintly Sita's home '-
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'Great Agastya ' answered Rama 'bless d is my banished lifeH
For thy kindriess to an exile and his friendless homeless wifeH
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But in wilder gloomier forests lonesome we must wander stillI
Where a deeper darker shadow settles on the rock and rill '-
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'Be it so ' Agastya answered 'two short yojans from this placeJ
Wild is Panchavati's forest where unseen the wild deer raceJ
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Godavari's limpid waters through its gloomy gorges flowK
Fruit and root and luscious berries on its silent margin growK
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Seek that spot and with thy brother build a lonesome leafy homeG
Tend thy true and toil worn Sita farther still she may not roamG
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Not unknown to me the mandate by thy royal father givenC
Not unseen thy endless wanderings destined by the will of HeavenC
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Therefore Panchavati's forest marked I for thy woodland stayL
Where the ripening wild fruit clusters and the wild bird trills his layL
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Tend thy dear devoted Sita and protect each pious riteM
Matchless in thy warlike wcapons peerless in thy princely mightM
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Mark yon gloomy Mahua forest stretching o'er the boundless leaB
Pass that wood and turning northward seek an old Nyagrodha treeB
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Then ascend a sloping upland by a steep and lofty hillI
Thou shalt enter Panchavati blossom covered calm and still '-
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Bowing to the great Agastya Rama left the mighty sageN
Bowing to each saint and hermit Lakshman left the hermitageO
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And the princes tall and stately marched where Panchavati layL
Soft eyed Sita followed meekly where her Rama led the wayL

Valmiki



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