Rama's Lament Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AA BB CC DE FF GG HH FF AA I JJ KK

'Art thou fallen ' sorrowed Rama 'weary of this endless strifeA
Lakshman if thy days are ended Rama recks not for his lifeA
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Gone is Rama's wonted valour weapons leave his nerveless handB
dropp his bow and shining arrows useless hangs his sheath d brandB
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Art thou fallen gallant Lakshman death and faintness on me creepC
Weary of this fatal contest let me by my brother sleepC
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Weary of the strife and triumph since my faithful friend is goneD
Rama follows in his footsteps and his task on earth is doneE
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Thou hast from the far Ayodhya followed me in deepest woodF
In the thickest of the battle thou hast by thy elder stoodF
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Love of woman love of comrade trite is love of kith and kindG
Love like thine true hearted brother not on earth we often findG
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When Sumitra seeks thee Lakshman ever weeping for thy sakeH
When she asks me of her hero what reply shall Rama makeH
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What reply when Bharat questions Where is be who went to woodF
Where is true and faithful Lakshman who beside his elder stoodF
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What great crime or fatal shadow darkens o'er my hapless lifeA
Victim to the sins of Rama sinless Lakshman falls in strifeA
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Best of brothers best of warriors wherefore thus unconscious heI
Mother wife and brother wait thee ope once more thy sleeping eye '-
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Tara's father wise Susena gentle consolation lentJ
Hanuman from distant mountains herbs of healing virtue rentJ
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And by loving Rama tended Lakshman in his strength aroseK
Stirred by thoughts of fatal vengeance Rama sought the flying foesK

Valmiki



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