Eclipsed Soul Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH| Elceeded my discreet | A |
| The life that once with joy did fleet | A |
| Turned pale and sorrow s cloak I wear | B |
| As silence whispers through the air | B |
| Blood runs dry and heart beats low | C |
| The river of dreams forgets to flow | C |
| Thou mind darketh in endless night | D |
| Where once did bloom the morning light | D |
| The light of hope now faint now gone | E |
| Faded beneath the darkened dawn | E |
| A soul adrift in weary sea | F |
| Seeking what once was memory | F |
| Waryness becomes my breath my art | G |
| A hollow echo of the heart | G |
| Yet still within this silent deep | H |
| A spark unseen refuses sleep | H |
Untamed
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Poet's note: A soul in a twilight world where the Sun of Hope has been devoured by a Dark Eclipse wanders across barren lands.
Each person it meets is a reflection of its lost emotions — Joy, Faith, Courage — turned to stone or shadow.
To restore the light, the soul must journey inward, confront its own darkness, and reignite the hidden ember within.
(The eclipse lifts only when the soul accepts both its light and its shadow.)
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