Savitri. Part Iv Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCDEFEF DGDGDGDGHIFJ KLKLDMDNDODO PQPQDDDDHRFR PSPSTPTPUDUD DVDVDWDWXDXD DLDLYIYJDLDL DDDDDWDWDODO LMLMLWLWLLLL DZDZRLRLDPDP HPFPDA2DA2XPXP MPMPDDDDLB2LB2 C2DC2DD2QD2QE2C2E2C2 DLDLPDPDPDPD MC2B2C2DYDYF2DF2D HC2HC2HC2HC2DG2DG2 H2PH2PPLPLHDHD I2DI2DLLLLC2XC2X PLPLLDLDLDLD LC2LC2J2C2K2C2YDYD DC2DC2PPPPL2H2L2H2 DDDDK2M2J2M2C2OC2O LDLDC2DC2DN2DN2DAs still Savitri sat beside | A |
Her husband dying dying fast | B |
She saw a stranger slowly glide | A |
Beneath the boughs that shrunk aghast | B |
Upon his head he wore a crown | C |
That shimmered in the doubtful light | D |
His vestment scarlet reached low down | C |
His waist a golden girdle dight | D |
His skin was dark as bronze his face | E |
Irradiate and yet severe | F |
His eyes had much of love and grace | E |
But glowed so bright they filled with fear | F |
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A string was in the stranger's hand | D |
Noosed at its end Her terrors now | G |
Savitri scarcely could command | D |
Upon the sod beneath a bough | G |
She gently laid her husband's head | D |
And in obeisance bent her brow | G |
No mortal form is thine she said | D |
Beseech thee say what god art thou | G |
And what can be thine errand here | H |
Savitri for thy prayers thy faith | I |
Thy frequent vows thy fasts severe | F |
I answer list my name is Death | J |
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And I am come myself to take | K |
Thy husband from this earth away | L |
And he shall cross the doleful lake | K |
In my own charge and let me say | L |
To few such honours I accord | D |
But his pure life and thine require | M |
No less from me The dreadful sword | D |
Like lightning glanced one moment dire | N |
And then the inner man was tied | D |
The soul no bigger than the thumb | O |
To be borne onwards by his side | D |
Savitri all the while stood dumb | O |
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But when the god moved slowly on | P |
To gain his own dominions dim | Q |
Leaving the body there anon | P |
Savitri meekly followed him | Q |
Hoping against all hope he turned | D |
And looked surprised Go back my child | D |
Pale pale the stars above them burned | D |
More weird the scene had grown and wild | D |
It is not for the living hear | H |
To follow where the dead must go | R |
Thy duty lies before thee clear | F |
What thou shouldst do the Shasters show | R |
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The funeral rites that they ordain | P |
And sacrifices must take up | S |
Thy first sad moments not in vain | P |
Is held to thee this bitter cup | S |
Its lessons thou shall learn in time | T |
All that thou canst do thou hast done | P |
For thy dear lord Thy love sublime | T |
My deepest sympathy hath won | P |
Return for thou hast come as far | U |
As living creature may Adieu | D |
Let duty be thy guiding star | U |
As ever To thyself be true | D |
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Where'er my husband dear is led | D |
Or journeys of his own free will | V |
I too must go though darkness spread | D |
Across my path portending ill | V |
'Tis thus my duty I have read | D |
If I am wrong oh with me bear | W |
But do not bid me backward tread | D |
My way forlorn for I can dare | W |
All things but that ah pity me | X |
A woman frail too sorely tried | D |
And let me let me follow thee | X |
O gracious god whate'er betide | D |
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By all things sacred I entreat | D |
By Penitence that purifies | L |
By prompt Obedience full complete | D |
To spiritual masters in the eyes | L |
Of gods so precious by the love | Y |
I bear my husband by the faith | I |
That looks from earth to heaven above | Y |
And by thy own great name O Death | J |
And all thy kindness bid me not | D |
To leave thee and to go my way | L |
But let me follow as I ought | D |
Thy steps and his as best I may | L |
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I know that in this transient world | D |
All is delusion nothing true | D |
I know its shows are mists unfurled | D |
To please and vanish To renew | D |
Its bubble joys be magic bound | D |
In Maya's network frail and fair | W |
Is not my aim The gladsome sound | D |
Of husband brother friend is air | W |
To such as know that all must die | D |
And that at last the time must come | O |
When eye shall speak no more to eye | D |
And Love cry Lo this is my sum | O |
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I know in such a world as this | L |
No one can gain his heart's desire | M |
Or pass the years in perfect bliss | L |
Like gold we must be tried by fire | M |
And each shall suffer as he acts | L |
And thinks his own sad burden bear | W |
No friends can help his sins are facts | L |
That nothing can annul or square | W |
And he must bear their consequence | L |
Can I my husband save by rites | L |
Ah no that were a vain pretence | L |
Justice eternal strict requites | L |
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He for his deeds shall get his due | D |
As I for mine thus here each soul | Z |
Is its own friend if it pursue | D |
The right and run straight for the goal | Z |
But its own worst and direst foe | R |
If it choose evil and in tracks | L |
Forbidden for its pleasure go | R |
Who knows not this true wisdom lacks | L |
Virtue should be the turn and end | D |
Of every life all else is vain | P |
Duty should be its dearest friend | D |
If higher life it would attain | P |
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So sweet thy words ring on mine ear | H |
Gentle Savitri that I fain | P |
Would give some sign to make it clear | F |
Thou hast not prayed to me in vain | P |
Satyavan's life I may not grant | D |
Nor take before its term thy life | A2 |
But I am not all adamant | D |
I feel for thee thou faithful wife | A2 |
Ask thou aught else and let it be | X |
Some good thing for thyself or thine | P |
And I shall give it child to thee | X |
If any power on earth be mine | P |
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Well be it so My husband's sire | M |
Hath lost his sight and fair domain | P |
Give to his eyes their former fire | M |
And place him on his throne again | P |
It shall be done Go back my child | D |
The hour wears late the wind feels cold | D |
The path becomes more weird and wild | D |
Thy feet are torn there's blood behold | D |
Thou feelest faint from weariness | L |
Oh try to follow me no more | B2 |
Go home and with thy presence bless | L |
Those who thine absence there deplore | B2 |
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No weariness O Death I feel | C2 |
And how should I when by the side | D |
Of Satyavan In woe and weal | C2 |
To be a helpmate swears the bride | D |
This is my place by solemn oath | D2 |
Wherever thou conductest him | Q |
I too must go to keep my troth | D2 |
And if the eye at times should brim | Q |
'Tis human weakness give me strength | E2 |
My work appointed to fulfil | C2 |
That I may gain the crown at length | E2 |
The gods give those who do their will | C2 |
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The power of goodness is so great | D |
We pray to feel its influence | L |
For ever on us It is late | D |
And the strange landscape awes my sense | L |
But I would fain with thee go on | P |
And hear thy voice so true and kind | D |
The false lights that on objects shone | P |
Have vanished and no longer blind | D |
Thanks to thy simple presence Now | P |
I feel a fresher air around | D |
And see the glory of that brow | P |
With flashing rubies fitly crowned | D |
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Men call thee Yama conqueror | M |
Because it is against their will | C2 |
They follow thee and they abhor | B2 |
The Truth which thou wouldst aye instil | C2 |
If they thy nature knew aright | D |
O god all other gods above | Y |
And that thou conquerest in the fight | D |
By patience kindness mercy love | Y |
And not by devastating wrath | F2 |
They would not shrink in childlike fright | D |
To see thy shadow on their path | F2 |
But hail thee as sick souls the light | D |
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Thy words Savitri greet mine ear | H |
As sweet as founts that murmur low | C2 |
To one who in the deserts drear | H |
With parch d tongue moves faint and slow | C2 |
Because thy talk is heart sincere | H |
Without hypocrisy or guile | C2 |
Demand another boon my dear | H |
But not of those forbad erewhile | C2 |
And I shall grant it ere we part | D |
Lo the stars pale the way is long | G2 |
Receive thy boon and homewards start | D |
For ah poor child thou art not strong | G2 |
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Another boon My sire the king | H2 |
Beside myself hath children none | P |
Oh grant that from his stock may spring | H2 |
A hundred boughs It shall be done | P |
He shall be blest with many a son | P |
Who his old palace shall rejoice | L |
Each heart wish from thy goodness won | P |
If I am still allowed a choice | L |
I fain thy voice would ever hear | H |
Reluctant am I still to part | D |
The way seems short when thou art near | H |
And Satyavan my heart's dear heart | D |
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Of all the pleasures given on earth | I2 |
The company of the good is best | D |
For weariness has never birth | I2 |
In such a commerce sweet and blest | D |
The sun runs on its wonted course | L |
The earth its plenteous treasure yields | L |
All for their sake and by the force | L |
Their prayer united ever wields | L |
Oh let me let me ever dwell | C2 |
Amidst the good where'er it be | X |
Whether in lowly hermit cell | C2 |
Or in some spot beyond the sea | X |
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The favours man accords to men | P |
Are never fruitless from them rise | L |
A thousand acts beyond our ken | P |
That float like incense to the skies | L |
For benefits can ne'er efface | L |
They multiply and widely spread | D |
And honour follows on their trace | L |
Sharp penances and vigils dread | D |
Austerities and wasting fasts | L |
Create an empire and the blest | D |
Long as this spiritual empire lasts | L |
Become the saviours of the rest | D |
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O thou endowed with every grace | L |
And every virtue thou whose soul | C2 |
Appears upon thy lovely face | L |
May the great gods who all control | C2 |
Send thee their peace I too would give | J2 |
One favour more before I go | C2 |
Ask something for thyself and live | K2 |
Happy and dear to all below | C2 |
Till summoned to the bliss above | Y |
Savitri ask and ask unblamed | D |
She took the clue felt Death was Love | Y |
For no exceptions now he named | D |
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And boldly said Thou knowest Lord | D |
The inmost hearts and thoughts of all | C2 |
There is no need to utter word | D |
Upon thy mercy sole I call | C2 |
If speech be needful to obtain | P |
Thy grace oh hear a wife forlorn | P |
Let my Satyavan live again | P |
And children unto us be born | P |
Wise brave and valiant From thy stock | L2 |
A hundred families shall spring | H2 |
As lasting as the solid rock | L2 |
Each son of thine shall be a king | H2 |
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As thus he spoke he loosed the knot | D |
The soul of Satyavan that bound | D |
And promised further that their lot | D |
In pleasant places should be found | D |
Thenceforth and that they both should live | K2 |
Four centuries to which the name | M2 |
Of fair Savitri men would give | J2 |
And then he vanished in a flame | M2 |
Adieu great god She took the soul | C2 |
No bigger than the human thumb | O |
And running swift soon reached her goal | C2 |
Where lay the body stark and dumb | O |
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She lifted it with eager hands | L |
And as before when he expired | D |
She placed the head upon the bands | L |
That bound her breast which hope new fired | D |
And which alternate rose and fell | C2 |
Then placed his soul upon his heart | D |
Whence like a bee it found its cell | C2 |
And lo he woke with sudden start | D |
His breath came low at first then deep | N2 |
With an unquiet look he gazed | D |
As one awaking from a sleep | N2 |
Wholly bewildered and amazed | D |
Toru Dutt
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