Savitri. Part Iv Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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As still Savitri sat besideA
Her husband dying dying fastB
She saw a stranger slowly glideA
Beneath the boughs that shrunk aghastB
Upon his head he wore a crownC
That shimmered in the doubtful lightD
His vestment scarlet reached low downC
His waist a golden girdle dightD
His skin was dark as bronze his faceE
Irradiate and yet severeF
His eyes had much of love and graceE
But glowed so bright they filled with fearF
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A string was in the stranger's handD
Noosed at its end Her terrors nowG
Savitri scarcely could commandD
Upon the sod beneath a boughG
She gently laid her husband's headD
And in obeisance bent her browG
No mortal form is thine she saidD
Beseech thee say what god art thouG
And what can be thine errand hereH
Savitri for thy prayers thy faithI
Thy frequent vows thy fasts severeF
I answer list my name is DeathJ
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And I am come myself to takeK
Thy husband from this earth awayL
And he shall cross the doleful lakeK
In my own charge and let me sayL
To few such honours I accordD
But his pure life and thine requireM
No less from me The dreadful swordD
Like lightning glanced one moment direN
And then the inner man was tiedD
The soul no bigger than the thumbO
To be borne onwards by his sideD
Savitri all the while stood dumbO
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But when the god moved slowly onP
To gain his own dominions dimQ
Leaving the body there anonP
Savitri meekly followed himQ
Hoping against all hope he turnedD
And looked surprised Go back my childD
Pale pale the stars above them burnedD
More weird the scene had grown and wildD
It is not for the living hearH
To follow where the dead must goR
Thy duty lies before thee clearF
What thou shouldst do the Shasters showR
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The funeral rites that they ordainP
And sacrifices must take upS
Thy first sad moments not in vainP
Is held to thee this bitter cupS
Its lessons thou shall learn in timeT
All that thou canst do thou hast doneP
For thy dear lord Thy love sublimeT
My deepest sympathy hath wonP
Return for thou hast come as farU
As living creature may AdieuD
Let duty be thy guiding starU
As ever To thyself be trueD
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Where'er my husband dear is ledD
Or journeys of his own free willV
I too must go though darkness spreadD
Across my path portending illV
'Tis thus my duty I have readD
If I am wrong oh with me bearW
But do not bid me backward treadD
My way forlorn for I can dareW
All things but that ah pity meX
A woman frail too sorely triedD
And let me let me follow theeX
O gracious god whate'er betideD
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By all things sacred I entreatD
By Penitence that purifiesL
By prompt Obedience full completeD
To spiritual masters in the eyesL
Of gods so precious by the loveY
I bear my husband by the faithI
That looks from earth to heaven aboveY
And by thy own great name O DeathJ
And all thy kindness bid me notD
To leave thee and to go my wayL
But let me follow as I oughtD
Thy steps and his as best I mayL
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I know that in this transient worldD
All is delusion nothing trueD
I know its shows are mists unfurledD
To please and vanish To renewD
Its bubble joys be magic boundD
In Maya's network frail and fairW
Is not my aim The gladsome soundD
Of husband brother friend is airW
To such as know that all must dieD
And that at last the time must comeO
When eye shall speak no more to eyeD
And Love cry Lo this is my sumO
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I know in such a world as thisL
No one can gain his heart's desireM
Or pass the years in perfect blissL
Like gold we must be tried by fireM
And each shall suffer as he actsL
And thinks his own sad burden bearW
No friends can help his sins are factsL
That nothing can annul or squareW
And he must bear their consequenceL
Can I my husband save by ritesL
Ah no that were a vain pretenceL
Justice eternal strict requitesL
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He for his deeds shall get his dueD
As I for mine thus here each soulZ
Is its own friend if it pursueD
The right and run straight for the goalZ
But its own worst and direst foeR
If it choose evil and in tracksL
Forbidden for its pleasure goR
Who knows not this true wisdom lacksL
Virtue should be the turn and endD
Of every life all else is vainP
Duty should be its dearest friendD
If higher life it would attainP
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So sweet thy words ring on mine earH
Gentle Savitri that I fainP
Would give some sign to make it clearF
Thou hast not prayed to me in vainP
Satyavan's life I may not grantD
Nor take before its term thy lifeA2
But I am not all adamantD
I feel for thee thou faithful wifeA2
Ask thou aught else and let it beX
Some good thing for thyself or thineP
And I shall give it child to theeX
If any power on earth be mineP
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Well be it so My husband's sireM
Hath lost his sight and fair domainP
Give to his eyes their former fireM
And place him on his throne againP
It shall be done Go back my childD
The hour wears late the wind feels coldD
The path becomes more weird and wildD
Thy feet are torn there's blood beholdD
Thou feelest faint from wearinessL
Oh try to follow me no moreB2
Go home and with thy presence blessL
Those who thine absence there deploreB2
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No weariness O Death I feelC2
And how should I when by the sideD
Of Satyavan In woe and wealC2
To be a helpmate swears the brideD
This is my place by solemn oathD2
Wherever thou conductest himQ
I too must go to keep my trothD2
And if the eye at times should brimQ
'Tis human weakness give me strengthE2
My work appointed to fulfilC2
That I may gain the crown at lengthE2
The gods give those who do their willC2
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The power of goodness is so greatD
We pray to feel its influenceL
For ever on us It is lateD
And the strange landscape awes my senseL
But I would fain with thee go onP
And hear thy voice so true and kindD
The false lights that on objects shoneP
Have vanished and no longer blindD
Thanks to thy simple presence NowP
I feel a fresher air aroundD
And see the glory of that browP
With flashing rubies fitly crownedD
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Men call thee Yama conquerorM
Because it is against their willC2
They follow thee and they abhorB2
The Truth which thou wouldst aye instilC2
If they thy nature knew arightD
O god all other gods aboveY
And that thou conquerest in the fightD
By patience kindness mercy loveY
And not by devastating wrathF2
They would not shrink in childlike frightD
To see thy shadow on their pathF2
But hail thee as sick souls the lightD
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Thy words Savitri greet mine earH
As sweet as founts that murmur lowC2
To one who in the deserts drearH
With parch d tongue moves faint and slowC2
Because thy talk is heart sincereH
Without hypocrisy or guileC2
Demand another boon my dearH
But not of those forbad erewhileC2
And I shall grant it ere we partD
Lo the stars pale the way is longG2
Receive thy boon and homewards startD
For ah poor child thou art not strongG2
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Another boon My sire the kingH2
Beside myself hath children noneP
Oh grant that from his stock may springH2
A hundred boughs It shall be doneP
He shall be blest with many a sonP
Who his old palace shall rejoiceL
Each heart wish from thy goodness wonP
If I am still allowed a choiceL
I fain thy voice would ever hearH
Reluctant am I still to partD
The way seems short when thou art nearH
And Satyavan my heart's dear heartD
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Of all the pleasures given on earthI2
The company of the good is bestD
For weariness has never birthI2
In such a commerce sweet and blestD
The sun runs on its wonted courseL
The earth its plenteous treasure yieldsL
All for their sake and by the forceL
Their prayer united ever wieldsL
Oh let me let me ever dwellC2
Amidst the good where'er it beX
Whether in lowly hermit cellC2
Or in some spot beyond the seaX
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The favours man accords to menP
Are never fruitless from them riseL
A thousand acts beyond our kenP
That float like incense to the skiesL
For benefits can ne'er effaceL
They multiply and widely spreadD
And honour follows on their traceL
Sharp penances and vigils dreadD
Austerities and wasting fastsL
Create an empire and the blestD
Long as this spiritual empire lastsL
Become the saviours of the restD
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O thou endowed with every graceL
And every virtue thou whose soulC2
Appears upon thy lovely faceL
May the great gods who all controlC2
Send thee their peace I too would giveJ2
One favour more before I goC2
Ask something for thyself and liveK2
Happy and dear to all belowC2
Till summoned to the bliss aboveY
Savitri ask and ask unblamedD
She took the clue felt Death was LoveY
For no exceptions now he namedD
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And boldly said Thou knowest LordD
The inmost hearts and thoughts of allC2
There is no need to utter wordD
Upon thy mercy sole I callC2
If speech be needful to obtainP
Thy grace oh hear a wife forlornP
Let my Satyavan live againP
And children unto us be bornP
Wise brave and valiant From thy stockL2
A hundred families shall springH2
As lasting as the solid rockL2
Each son of thine shall be a kingH2
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As thus he spoke he loosed the knotD
The soul of Satyavan that boundD
And promised further that their lotD
In pleasant places should be foundD
Thenceforth and that they both should liveK2
Four centuries to which the nameM2
Of fair Savitri men would giveJ2
And then he vanished in a flameM2
Adieu great god She took the soulC2
No bigger than the human thumbO
And running swift soon reached her goalC2
Where lay the body stark and dumbO
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She lifted it with eager handsL
And as before when he expiredD
She placed the head upon the bandsL
That bound her breast which hope new firedD
And which alternate rose and fellC2
Then placed his soul upon his heartD
Whence like a bee it found its cellC2
And lo he woke with sudden startD
His breath came low at first then deepN2
With an unquiet look he gazedD
As one awaking from a sleepN2
Wholly bewildered and amazedD

Toru Dutt



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