Savitri. Part Ii Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCDEFEF GHGHIJIJKLKM NONOPQPQRSRT KUKUVPVPWXYX ZA2B2A2TC2SC2EC2EC2 D2E2D2E2F2G2H2G2I2J2 I2J2 K2L2K2L2M2N2M2N2RO2R O2 P2DQ2DR2UR2US2T2S2T2 HU2HU2V2QV2QW2C2X2C2 G2Y2G2Z2IA3IA3B3C3B3 C3 DD3DD3EE3EE3F3T2F3T2 G3H3G3H3I3EJ3EK3L3M3 L3 N3G2O3G2M2O2M2O2E2SE 2S H2M3H2M3P3M2P3M2MG2M G2 E3EE3ERQ3RQ3EMEM EEEEER3ER3S3M3T3M3 U3M3U3M3V3QV3QEM3EM3 M3M3M3M3W3M3W3M3X3EX 3E Y3EY3EZ3M2Z3M2EJ2EJ2 EEEEEA4EA4GEGE B4W3C4W3M3D4M3D4EEEE ME4ME4MELEF4P3F4P3 M3EM3EW3EW3EXEXEGreat joy in Madra Blow the shell | A |
The marriage over to declare | B |
And now to forest shades where dwell | A |
The hermits wend the wedded pair | B |
The doors of every house are hung | C |
With gay festoons of leaves and flowers | D |
And blazing banners broad are flung | C |
And trumpets blown from castle towers | D |
Slow the procession makes its ground | E |
Along the crowded city street | F |
And blessings in a storm of sound | E |
At every step the couple greet | F |
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Past all the houses past the wall | G |
Past gardens gay and hedgerows trim | H |
Past fields where sinuous brooklets small | G |
With molten silver to the brim | H |
Glance in the sun's expiring light | I |
Past frowning hills past pastures wild | J |
At last arises on the sight | I |
Foliage on foliage densely piled | J |
The woods primeval where reside | K |
The holy hermits henceforth here | L |
Must live the fair and gentle bride | K |
But this thought brought with it no fear | M |
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Fear With her husband by her still | N |
Or weariness Where all was new | O |
Hark What a welcome from the hill | N |
There gathered are a hermits few | O |
Screaming the peacocks upward soar | P |
Wondering the timid wild deer gaze | Q |
And from Briarean fig trees hoar | P |
Look down the monkeys in amaze | Q |
As the procession moves along | R |
And now behold the bridegroom's sire | S |
With joy comes forth amid the throng | R |
What reverence his looks inspire | T |
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Blind With his partner by his side | K |
For them it was a hallowed time | U |
Warmly they greet the modest bride | K |
With her dark eyes and front sublime | U |
One only grief they feel Shall she | V |
Who dwelt in palace halls before | P |
Dwell in their huts beneath the tree | V |
Would not their hard life press her sore | P |
The manual labour and the want | W |
Of comforts that her rank became | X |
Valkala robes meals poor and scant | Y |
All undermine the fragile frame | X |
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To see the bride the hermits' wives | Z |
And daughters gathered to the huts | A2 |
Women of pure and saintly lives | B2 |
And there beneath the betel nuts | A2 |
Tall trees like pillars they admire | T |
Her beauty and congratulate | C2 |
The parents that their hearts' desire | S |
Had thus accorded been by Fate | C2 |
And Satyavan their son had found | E |
In exile lone a fitting mate | C2 |
And gossips add good signs abound | E |
Prosperity shall on her wait | C2 |
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Good signs in features limbs and eyes | D2 |
That old experience can discern | E2 |
Good signs on earth and in the skies | D2 |
That it could read at every turn | E2 |
And now with rice and gold all bless | F2 |
The bride and bridegroom and they go | G2 |
Happy in others' happiness | H2 |
Each to her home beneath the glow | G2 |
Of the late risen moon that lines | I2 |
With silver all the ghost like trees | J2 |
Sals tamarisks and South Sea pines | I2 |
And palms whose plumes wave in the breeze | J2 |
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False was the fear the parents felt | K2 |
Savitri liked her new life much | L2 |
Though in a lowly home she dwelt | K2 |
Her conduct as a wife was such | L2 |
As to illumine all the place | M2 |
She sickened not nor sighed nor pined | N2 |
But with simplicity and grace | M2 |
Discharged each household duty kind | N2 |
Strong in all manual work and strong | R |
To comfort cherish help and pray | O2 |
The hours past peacefully along | R |
And rippling bright day followed day | O2 |
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At morn Satyavan to the wood | P2 |
Early repaired and gathered flowers | D |
And fruits in its wild solitude | Q2 |
And fuel till advancing hours | D |
Apprised him that his frugal meal | R2 |
Awaited him Ah happy time | U |
Savitri who with fervid zeal | R2 |
Had said her orisons sublime | U |
And fed the Bramins and the birds | S2 |
Now ministered Arcadian love | T2 |
With tender smiles and honeyed words | S2 |
All bliss of earth thou art above | T2 |
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And yet there was a spectre grim | H |
A skeleton in Savitri's heart | U2 |
Looming in shadow somewhat dim | H |
But which would never thence depart | U2 |
It was that fatal fatal speech | V2 |
Of Narad Muni As the days | Q |
Slipt smoothly past each after each | V2 |
In private she more fervent prays | Q |
But there is none to share her fears | W2 |
For how could she communicate | C2 |
The sad cause of her bidden tears | X2 |
The doom approached the fatal date | C2 |
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No help from man Well be it so | G2 |
No sympathy it matters not | Y2 |
God can avert the heavy blow | G2 |
He answers worship Thus she thought | Z2 |
And so her prayers by day and night | I |
Like incense rose unto the throne | A3 |
Nor did she vow neglect or rite | I |
The Veds enjoin or helpful own | A3 |
Upon the fourteenth of the moon | B3 |
As nearer came the time of dread | C3 |
In Joystee that is May or June | B3 |
She vowed her vows and Bramins fed | C3 |
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And now she counted e'en the hours | D |
As to Eternity they past | D3 |
O'er head the dark cloud darker lowers | D |
The year is rounding full at last | D3 |
To day to day with doleful sound | E |
The word seem'd in her ear to ring | E3 |
O breaking heart thy pain profound | E |
Thy husband knows not nor the king | E3 |
Exiled and blind nor yet the queen | F3 |
But One knows in His place above | T2 |
To day to day it will be seen | F3 |
Which shall be victor Death or Love | T2 |
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Incessant in her prayers from morn | G3 |
The noon is safely tided then | H3 |
A gleam of faint faint hope is born | G3 |
But the heart fluttered like a wren | H3 |
That sees the shadow of the hawk | I3 |
Sail on and trembles in affright | E |
Lest a down rushing swoop should mock | J3 |
Its fortune and o'erwhelm it quite | E |
The afternoon has come and gone | K3 |
And brought no change should she rejoice | L3 |
The gentle evening's shades come on | M3 |
When hark She hears her husband's voice | L3 |
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The twilight is most beautiful | N3 |
Mother to gather fruit I go | G2 |
And fuel for the air is cool | O3 |
Expect me in an hour or so | G2 |
The night my child draws on apace | M2 |
The mother's voice was heard to say | O2 |
The forest paths are hard to trace | M2 |
In darkness till the morrow stay | O2 |
Not hard for me who can discern | E2 |
The forest paths in any hour | S |
Blindfold I could with ease return | E2 |
And day has not yet lost its power | S |
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He goes then thought Savitri thus | H2 |
With unseen bands Fate draws us on | M3 |
Unto the place appointed us | H2 |
We feel no outward force anon | M3 |
We go to marriage or to death | P3 |
At a determined time and place | M2 |
We are her playthings with her breath | P3 |
She blows us where she lists in space | M2 |
What is my duty It is clear | M |
My husband I must follow so | G2 |
While he collects his forest gear | M |
Let me permission get to go | G2 |
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His sire she seeks the blind old king | E3 |
And asks from him permission straight | E |
My daughter night with ebon wing | E3 |
Hovers above the hour is late | E |
My son is active brave and strong | R |
Conversant with the woods he knows | Q3 |
Each path methinks it would be wrong | R |
For thee to venture where he goes | Q3 |
Weak and defenceless as thou art | E |
At such a time If thou wert near | M |
Thou might'st embarrass him dear heart | E |
Alone he would not have a fear | M |
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So spake the hermit monarch blind | E |
His wife too entering in exprest | E |
The self same thoughts in words as kind | E |
And begged Savitri hard to rest | E |
Thy recent fasts and vigils child | E |
Make thee unfit to undertake | R3 |
This journey to the forest wild | E |
But nothing could her purpose shake | R3 |
She urged the nature of her vows | S3 |
Required her now the rites were done | M3 |
To follow where her loving spouse | T3 |
Might e'en a chance of danger run | M3 |
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Go then my child we give thee leave | U3 |
But with thy husband quick return | M3 |
Before the flickering shades of eve | U3 |
Deepen to night and planets burn | M3 |
And forest paths become obscure | V3 |
Lit only by their doubtful rays | Q |
The gods who guard all women pure | V3 |
Bless thee and kept thee in thy ways | Q |
And safely bring thee and thy lord | E |
On this she left and swiftly ran | M3 |
Where with his saw in lieu of sword | E |
And basket plodded Satyavan | M3 |
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Oh lovely are the woods at dawn | M3 |
And lovely in the sultry noon | M3 |
But loveliest when the sun withdrawn | M3 |
The twilight and a crescent moon | M3 |
Change all asperities of shape | W3 |
And tone all colours softly down | M3 |
With a blue veil of silvered crape | W3 |
Lo By that hill which palm trees crown | M3 |
Down the deep glade with perfume rife | X3 |
From buds that to the dews expand | E |
The husband and the faithful wife | X3 |
Pass to dense jungle hand in hand | E |
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Satyavan bears beside his saw | Y3 |
A fork d stick to pluck the fruit | E |
His wife the basket lined with straw | Y3 |
He talks but she is almost mute | E |
And very pale The minutes pass | Z3 |
The basket has no further space | M2 |
Now on the fruits they flowers amass | Z3 |
That with their red flush all the place | M2 |
While twilight lingers then for wood | E |
He saws the branches of the trees | J2 |
The noise heard in the solitude | E |
Grates on its soft low harmonies | J2 |
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And all the while one dreadful thought | E |
Haunted Savitri's anxious mind | E |
Which would have fain its stress forgot | E |
It came as chainless as the wind | E |
Oft and again thus on the spot | E |
Marked with his heart blood oft comes back | A4 |
The murdered man to see the clot | E |
Death's final blow the fatal wrack | A4 |
Of every hope whence will it fall | G |
For fall by Narad's words it must | E |
Persistent rising to appall | G |
This thought its horrid presence thrust | E |
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Sudden the noise is hushed a pause | B4 |
Satyavan lets the weapon drop | W3 |
Too well Savitri knows the cause | C4 |
He feels not well the work must stop | W3 |
A pain is in his head a pain | M3 |
As if he felt the cobra's fangs | D4 |
He tries to look around in vain | M3 |
A mist before his vision hangs | D4 |
The trees whirl dizzily around | E |
In a fantastic fashion wild | E |
His throat and chest seem iron bound | E |
He staggers like a sleepy child | E |
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My head my head Savitri dear | M |
This pain is frightful Let me lie | E4 |
Here on the turf Her voice was clear | M |
And very calm was her reply | E4 |
As if her heart had banished fear | M |
Lean love thy head upon my breast | E |
And as she helped him added here | L |
So shall thou better breathe and rest | E |
Ah me this pain 'tis getting dark | F4 |
I see no more can this be death | P3 |
What means this gods Savitri mark | F4 |
My hands wax cold and fails my breath | P3 |
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It may be but a swoon Ah no | M3 |
Arrows are piercing through my heart | E |
Farewell my love for I must go | M3 |
This this is death He gave one start | E |
And then lay quiet on her lap | W3 |
Insensible to sight and sound | E |
Breathing his last The branches flap | W3 |
And fireflies glimmer all around | E |
His head upon her breast his frame | X |
Part on her lap part on the ground | E |
Thus lies he Hours pass Still the same | X |
The pair look statues magic bound | E |
Toru Dutt
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