Savitri. Part Ii Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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Great joy in Madra Blow the shellA
The marriage over to declareB
And now to forest shades where dwellA
The hermits wend the wedded pairB
The doors of every house are hungC
With gay festoons of leaves and flowersD
And blazing banners broad are flungC
And trumpets blown from castle towersD
Slow the procession makes its groundE
Along the crowded city streetF
And blessings in a storm of soundE
At every step the couple greetF
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Past all the houses past the wallG
Past gardens gay and hedgerows trimH
Past fields where sinuous brooklets smallG
With molten silver to the brimH
Glance in the sun's expiring lightI
Past frowning hills past pastures wildJ
At last arises on the sightI
Foliage on foliage densely piledJ
The woods primeval where resideK
The holy hermits henceforth hereL
Must live the fair and gentle brideK
But this thought brought with it no fearM
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Fear With her husband by her stillN
Or weariness Where all was newO
Hark What a welcome from the hillN
There gathered are a hermits fewO
Screaming the peacocks upward soarP
Wondering the timid wild deer gazeQ
And from Briarean fig trees hoarP
Look down the monkeys in amazeQ
As the procession moves alongR
And now behold the bridegroom's sireS
With joy comes forth amid the throngR
What reverence his looks inspireT
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Blind With his partner by his sideK
For them it was a hallowed timeU
Warmly they greet the modest brideK
With her dark eyes and front sublimeU
One only grief they feel Shall sheV
Who dwelt in palace halls beforeP
Dwell in their huts beneath the treeV
Would not their hard life press her soreP
The manual labour and the wantW
Of comforts that her rank becameX
Valkala robes meals poor and scantY
All undermine the fragile frameX
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To see the bride the hermits' wivesZ
And daughters gathered to the hutsA2
Women of pure and saintly livesB2
And there beneath the betel nutsA2
Tall trees like pillars they admireT
Her beauty and congratulateC2
The parents that their hearts' desireS
Had thus accorded been by FateC2
And Satyavan their son had foundE
In exile lone a fitting mateC2
And gossips add good signs aboundE
Prosperity shall on her waitC2
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Good signs in features limbs and eyesD2
That old experience can discernE2
Good signs on earth and in the skiesD2
That it could read at every turnE2
And now with rice and gold all blessF2
The bride and bridegroom and they goG2
Happy in others' happinessH2
Each to her home beneath the glowG2
Of the late risen moon that linesI2
With silver all the ghost like treesJ2
Sals tamarisks and South Sea pinesI2
And palms whose plumes wave in the breezeJ2
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False was the fear the parents feltK2
Savitri liked her new life muchL2
Though in a lowly home she dweltK2
Her conduct as a wife was suchL2
As to illumine all the placeM2
She sickened not nor sighed nor pinedN2
But with simplicity and graceM2
Discharged each household duty kindN2
Strong in all manual work and strongR
To comfort cherish help and prayO2
The hours past peacefully alongR
And rippling bright day followed dayO2
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At morn Satyavan to the woodP2
Early repaired and gathered flowersD
And fruits in its wild solitudeQ2
And fuel till advancing hoursD
Apprised him that his frugal mealR2
Awaited him Ah happy timeU
Savitri who with fervid zealR2
Had said her orisons sublimeU
And fed the Bramins and the birdsS2
Now ministered Arcadian loveT2
With tender smiles and honeyed wordsS2
All bliss of earth thou art aboveT2
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And yet there was a spectre grimH
A skeleton in Savitri's heartU2
Looming in shadow somewhat dimH
But which would never thence departU2
It was that fatal fatal speechV2
Of Narad Muni As the daysQ
Slipt smoothly past each after eachV2
In private she more fervent praysQ
But there is none to share her fearsW2
For how could she communicateC2
The sad cause of her bidden tearsX2
The doom approached the fatal dateC2
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No help from man Well be it soG2
No sympathy it matters notY2
God can avert the heavy blowG2
He answers worship Thus she thoughtZ2
And so her prayers by day and nightI
Like incense rose unto the throneA3
Nor did she vow neglect or riteI
The Veds enjoin or helpful ownA3
Upon the fourteenth of the moonB3
As nearer came the time of dreadC3
In Joystee that is May or JuneB3
She vowed her vows and Bramins fedC3
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And now she counted e'en the hoursD
As to Eternity they pastD3
O'er head the dark cloud darker lowersD
The year is rounding full at lastD3
To day to day with doleful soundE
The word seem'd in her ear to ringE3
O breaking heart thy pain profoundE
Thy husband knows not nor the kingE3
Exiled and blind nor yet the queenF3
But One knows in His place aboveT2
To day to day it will be seenF3
Which shall be victor Death or LoveT2
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Incessant in her prayers from mornG3
The noon is safely tided thenH3
A gleam of faint faint hope is bornG3
But the heart fluttered like a wrenH3
That sees the shadow of the hawkI3
Sail on and trembles in affrightE
Lest a down rushing swoop should mockJ3
Its fortune and o'erwhelm it quiteE
The afternoon has come and goneK3
And brought no change should she rejoiceL3
The gentle evening's shades come onM3
When hark She hears her husband's voiceL3
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The twilight is most beautifulN3
Mother to gather fruit I goG2
And fuel for the air is coolO3
Expect me in an hour or soG2
The night my child draws on apaceM2
The mother's voice was heard to sayO2
The forest paths are hard to traceM2
In darkness till the morrow stayO2
Not hard for me who can discernE2
The forest paths in any hourS
Blindfold I could with ease returnE2
And day has not yet lost its powerS
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He goes then thought Savitri thusH2
With unseen bands Fate draws us onM3
Unto the place appointed usH2
We feel no outward force anonM3
We go to marriage or to deathP3
At a determined time and placeM2
We are her playthings with her breathP3
She blows us where she lists in spaceM2
What is my duty It is clearM
My husband I must follow soG2
While he collects his forest gearM
Let me permission get to goG2
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His sire she seeks the blind old kingE3
And asks from him permission straightE
My daughter night with ebon wingE3
Hovers above the hour is lateE
My son is active brave and strongR
Conversant with the woods he knowsQ3
Each path methinks it would be wrongR
For thee to venture where he goesQ3
Weak and defenceless as thou artE
At such a time If thou wert nearM
Thou might'st embarrass him dear heartE
Alone he would not have a fearM
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So spake the hermit monarch blindE
His wife too entering in exprestE
The self same thoughts in words as kindE
And begged Savitri hard to restE
Thy recent fasts and vigils childE
Make thee unfit to undertakeR3
This journey to the forest wildE
But nothing could her purpose shakeR3
She urged the nature of her vowsS3
Required her now the rites were doneM3
To follow where her loving spouseT3
Might e'en a chance of danger runM3
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Go then my child we give thee leaveU3
But with thy husband quick returnM3
Before the flickering shades of eveU3
Deepen to night and planets burnM3
And forest paths become obscureV3
Lit only by their doubtful raysQ
The gods who guard all women pureV3
Bless thee and kept thee in thy waysQ
And safely bring thee and thy lordE
On this she left and swiftly ranM3
Where with his saw in lieu of swordE
And basket plodded SatyavanM3
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Oh lovely are the woods at dawnM3
And lovely in the sultry noonM3
But loveliest when the sun withdrawnM3
The twilight and a crescent moonM3
Change all asperities of shapeW3
And tone all colours softly downM3
With a blue veil of silvered crapeW3
Lo By that hill which palm trees crownM3
Down the deep glade with perfume rifeX3
From buds that to the dews expandE
The husband and the faithful wifeX3
Pass to dense jungle hand in handE
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Satyavan bears beside his sawY3
A fork d stick to pluck the fruitE
His wife the basket lined with strawY3
He talks but she is almost muteE
And very pale The minutes passZ3
The basket has no further spaceM2
Now on the fruits they flowers amassZ3
That with their red flush all the placeM2
While twilight lingers then for woodE
He saws the branches of the treesJ2
The noise heard in the solitudeE
Grates on its soft low harmoniesJ2
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And all the while one dreadful thoughtE
Haunted Savitri's anxious mindE
Which would have fain its stress forgotE
It came as chainless as the windE
Oft and again thus on the spotE
Marked with his heart blood oft comes backA4
The murdered man to see the clotE
Death's final blow the fatal wrackA4
Of every hope whence will it fallG
For fall by Narad's words it mustE
Persistent rising to appallG
This thought its horrid presence thrustE
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Sudden the noise is hushed a pauseB4
Satyavan lets the weapon dropW3
Too well Savitri knows the causeC4
He feels not well the work must stopW3
A pain is in his head a painM3
As if he felt the cobra's fangsD4
He tries to look around in vainM3
A mist before his vision hangsD4
The trees whirl dizzily aroundE
In a fantastic fashion wildE
His throat and chest seem iron boundE
He staggers like a sleepy childE
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My head my head Savitri dearM
This pain is frightful Let me lieE4
Here on the turf Her voice was clearM
And very calm was her replyE4
As if her heart had banished fearM
Lean love thy head upon my breastE
And as she helped him added hereL
So shall thou better breathe and restE
Ah me this pain 'tis getting darkF4
I see no more can this be deathP3
What means this gods Savitri markF4
My hands wax cold and fails my breathP3
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It may be but a swoon Ah noM3
Arrows are piercing through my heartE
Farewell my love for I must goM3
This this is death He gave one startE
And then lay quiet on her lapW3
Insensible to sight and soundE
Breathing his last The branches flapW3
And fireflies glimmer all aroundE
His head upon her breast his frameX
Part on her lap part on the groundE
Thus lies he Hours pass Still the sameX
The pair look statues magic boundE

Toru Dutt



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