Savitri. Part I Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCDEDED FGFGHGHGHIHI JKJKLMLNOPOP QRSRCECETLTL UVUVWXWXYZYZ A2KA2KB2C2B2C2D2HD2H E2BE2BF2GF2GEG2EG2 MH2NH2LBI2BJ2K2J2K2 L2M2L2N2O2QO2QP2Q2P2 Q2 R2S2R2S2T2U2T2U2V2W2 V2W2 QHQHX2Y2X2Y2Z2Y2Z2Y2 A3X2A3B3C3QC3QD3AD3A MW2NW2Y2HY2HM2Y2M2Y2 K2E3K2E3VE3VE3F3GF3G E3E3E3E3QQQQLE3LE3 G3E3G3E3H3QH3QN2D2M2 D2 QI3QI3E3E3E3E3E3E3E3 E3 J3K3J3K3E3M2E3M2M2L3 M2L3 E3D2E3D2E3E3E3E3M2QM 2Q QTQTM3QM3QQQQQ N3O3N3O3E3M2E3M2QM2Q M2 P3E3Q3E3R3SR3SRS3RT3| Savitri was the only child | A |
| Of Madra's wise and mighty king | B |
| Stern warriors when they saw her smiled | A |
| As mountains smile to see the spring | B |
| Fair as a lotus when the moon | C |
| Kisses its opening petals red | D |
| After sweet showers in sultry June | C |
| With happier heart and lighter tread | D |
| Chance strangers having met her past | E |
| And often would they turn the head | D |
| A lingering second look to cast | E |
| And bless the vision ere it fled | D |
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| What was her own peculiar charm | F |
| The soft black eyes the raven hair | G |
| The curving neck the rounded arm | F |
| All these are common everywhere | G |
| Her charm was this upon her face | H |
| Childlike and innocent and fair | G |
| No man with thought impure or base | H |
| Could ever look the glory there | G |
| The sweet simplicity and grace | H |
| Abashed the boldest but the good | I |
| God's purity there loved to trace | H |
| Mirrored in dawning womanhood | I |
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| In those far off primeval days | J |
| Fair India's daughters were not pent | K |
| In closed zenanas On her ways | J |
| Savitri at her pleasure went | K |
| Whither she chose and hour by hour | L |
| With young companions of her age | M |
| She roamed the woods for fruit or flower | L |
| Or loitered in some hermitage | N |
| For to the Munis gray and old | O |
| Her presence was as sunshine glad | P |
| They taught her wonders manifold | O |
| And gave her of the best they had | P |
| - | |
| Her father let her have her way | Q |
| In all things whether high or low | R |
| He feared no harm he knew no ill | S |
| Could touch a nature pure as snow | R |
| Long childless as a priceless boon | C |
| He had obtained this child at last | E |
| By prayers made morning night and noon | C |
| With many a vigil many a fast | E |
| Would Shiva his own gift recall | T |
| Or mar its perfect beauty ever | L |
| No he had faith he gave her all | T |
| She wished and feared and doubted never | L |
| - | |
| And so she wandered where she pleased | U |
| In boyish freedom Happy time | V |
| No small vexations ever teased | U |
| Nor crushing sorrows dimmed her prime | V |
| One care alone her father felt | W |
| Where should he find a fitting mate | X |
| For one so pure His thoughts long dwelt | W |
| On this as with his queen he sate | X |
| Ah whom dear wife should we select | Y |
| Leave it to God she answering cried | Z |
| Savitri may herself elect | Y |
| Some day her future lord and guide | Z |
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| Months passed and lo one summer morn | A2 |
| As to the hermitage she went | K |
| Through smiling fields of waving corn | A2 |
| She saw some youths on sport intent | K |
| Sons of the hermits and their peers | B2 |
| And one among them tall and lithe | C2 |
| Royal in port on whom the years | B2 |
| Consenting shed a grace so blithe | C2 |
| So frank and noble that the eye | D2 |
| Was loth to quit that sun browned face | H |
| She looked and looked then gave a sigh | D2 |
| And slackened suddenly her pace | H |
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| What was the meaning was it love | E2 |
| Love at first sight as poets sing | B |
| Is then no fiction Heaven above | E2 |
| Is witness that the heart its king | B |
| Finds often like a lightning flash | F2 |
| We play we jest we have no care | G |
| When hark a step there comes no crash | F2 |
| But life or silent slow despair | G |
| Their eyes just met Savitri past | E |
| Into the friendly Muni's hut | G2 |
| Her heart rose opened had at last | E |
| Opened no flower can ever shut | G2 |
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| In converse with the gray haired sage | M |
| She learnt the story of the youth | H2 |
| His name and place and parentage | N |
| Of royal race he was in truth | H2 |
| Satyavan was he hight his sire | L |
| Dyoumatsen had been Salva's king | B |
| But old and blind opponents dire | I2 |
| Had gathered round him in a ring | B |
| And snatched the sceptre from his hand | J2 |
| Now with his queen and only son | K2 |
| He lived a hermit in the land | J2 |
| And gentler hermit was there none | K2 |
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| With many tears was said and heard | L2 |
| The story and with praise sincere | M2 |
| Of Prince Satyavan every word | L2 |
| Sent up a flush on cheek and ear | N2 |
| Unnoticed Hark The bells remind | O2 |
| 'Tis time to go she went away | Q |
| Leaving her virgin heart behind | O2 |
| And richer for the loss A ray | Q |
| Shot down from heaven appeared to tinge | P2 |
| All objects with supernal light | Q2 |
| The thatches had a rainbow fringe | P2 |
| The cornfields looked more green and bright | Q2 |
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| Savitri's first care was to tell | R2 |
| Her mother all her feelings new | S2 |
| The queen her own fears to dispel | R2 |
| To the king's private chamber flew | S2 |
| Now what is it my gentle queen | T2 |
| That makes thee hurry in this wise | U2 |
| She told him smiles and tears between | T2 |
| All she had heard the king with sighs | U2 |
| Sadly replied I fear me much | V2 |
| Whence is his race and what his creed | W2 |
| Not knowing aught can we in such | V2 |
| A matter delicate proceed | W2 |
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| As if the king's doubts to allay | Q |
| Came Narad Muni to the place | H |
| A few days after Old and gray | Q |
| All loved to see the gossip's face | H |
| Great Brahma's son adored of men | X2 |
| Long absent doubly welcome he | Y2 |
| Unto the monarch hoping then | X2 |
| By his assistance clear to see | Y2 |
| No god in heaven nor king on earth | Z2 |
| But Narad knew his history | Y2 |
| The sun's the moon's the planets' birth | Z2 |
| Was not to him a mystery | Y2 |
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| Now welcome welcome dear old friend | A3 |
| All hail and welcome once again | X2 |
| The greeting had not reached its end | A3 |
| When glided like a music strain | B3 |
| Savitri's presence through the room | C3 |
| And who is this bright creature say | Q |
| Whose radiance lights the chamber's gloom | C3 |
| Is she an Apsara or fay | Q |
| No son thy servant hath alas | D3 |
| This is my one my only child | A |
| And married No The seasons pass | D3 |
| Make haste O king he said and smiled | A |
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| That is the very theme O sage | M |
| In which thy wisdom ripe I need | W2 |
| Seen hath she at the hermitage | N |
| A youth to whom in very deed | W2 |
| Her heart inclines And who is he | Y2 |
| My daughter tell his name and race | H |
| Speak as to men who best love thee | Y2 |
| She turned to them her modest face | H |
| And answered quietly and clear | M2 |
| Ah no ah no It cannot be | Y2 |
| Choose out another husband dear | M2 |
| The Muni cried or woe is me | Y2 |
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| And why should I When I have given | K2 |
| My heart away though but in thought | E3 |
| Can I take back Forbid it Heaven | K2 |
| It were a deadly sin I wot | E3 |
| And why should I I know no crime | V |
| In him or his Believe me child | E3 |
| My reasons shall be clear in time | V |
| I speak not like a madman wild | E3 |
| Trust me in this I cannot break | F3 |
| A plighted faith I cannot bear | G |
| A wounded conscience Oh forsake | F3 |
| This fancy hence may spring despair | G |
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| It may not be The father heard | E3 |
| By turns the speakers and in doubt | E3 |
| Thus interposed a gentle word | E3 |
| Friend should to friend his mind speak out | E3 |
| Is he not worthy tell us Nay | Q |
| All worthiness is in Satyavan | Q |
| And no one can my praise gainsay | Q |
| Of solar race more god than man | Q |
| Great Soorasen his ancestor | L |
| And Dyoumatsen his father blind | E3 |
| Are known to fame I can aver | L |
| No kings have been so good and kind | E3 |
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| Then where O Muni is the bar | G3 |
| If wealth be gone and kingdom lost | E3 |
| His merit still remains a star | G3 |
| Nor melts his lineage like the frost | E3 |
| For riches worldly power or rank | H3 |
| I care not I would have my son | Q |
| Pure wise and brave the Fates I thank | H3 |
| I see no hindrance no not one | Q |
| Since thou insistest King to hear | N2 |
| The fatal truth I tell you I | D2 |
| Upon this day as rounds the year | M2 |
| The young Prince Satyavan shall die | D2 |
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| This was enough The monarch knew | Q |
| The future was no seal d book | I3 |
| To Brahma's son A clammy dew | Q |
| Spread on his brow he gently took | I3 |
| Savitri's palm in his and said | E3 |
| No child can give away her hand | E3 |
| A pledge is nought unsanction d | E3 |
| And here if right I understand | E3 |
| There was no pledge at all a thought | E3 |
| A shadow barely crossed the mind | E3 |
| Unblamed it may be clean forgot | E3 |
| Before the gods it cannot bind | E3 |
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| And think upon the dreadful curse | J3 |
| Of widowhood the vigils fasts | K3 |
| And penances no life is worse | J3 |
| Than hopeless life the while it lasts | K3 |
| Day follows day in one long round | E3 |
| Monotonous and blank and drear | M2 |
| Less painful were it to be bound | E3 |
| On some bleak rock for aye to hear | M2 |
| Without one chance of getting free | M2 |
| The ocean's melancholy voice | L3 |
| Mine be the sin if sin there be | M2 |
| But thou must make a different choice | L3 |
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| In the meek grace of virginhood | E3 |
| Unblanched her cheek undimmed her eye | D2 |
| Savitri like a statue stood | E3 |
| Somewhat austere was her reply | D2 |
| Once and once only all submit | E3 |
| To Destiny 'tis God's command | E3 |
| Once and once only so 'tis writ | E3 |
| Shall woman pledge her faith and hand | E3 |
| Once and once only can a sire | M2 |
| Unto his well loved daughter say | Q |
| In presence of the witness fire | M2 |
| I give thee to this man away | Q |
| - | |
| Once and once only have I given | Q |
| My heart and faith 'tis past recall | T |
| With conscience none have ever striven | Q |
| And none may strive without a fall | T |
| Not the less solemn was my vow | M3 |
| Because unheard and oh the sin | Q |
| Will not be less if I should now | M3 |
| Deny the feeling felt within | Q |
| Unwedded to my dying day | Q |
| I must my father dear remain | Q |
| 'Tis well if so thou will'st but say | Q |
| Can man balk Fate or break its chain | Q |
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| If Fate so rules that I should feel | N3 |
| The miseries of a widow's life | O3 |
| Can man's device the doom repeal | N3 |
| Unequal seems to be a strife | O3 |
| Between Humanity and Fate | E3 |
| None have on earth what they desire | M2 |
| Death comes to all or soon or late | E3 |
| And peace is but a wandering fire | M2 |
| Expediency leads wild astray | Q |
| The Right must be our guiding star | M2 |
| Duty our watchword come what may | Q |
| Judge for me friends as wiser far | M2 |
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| She said and meekly looked to both | P3 |
| The father though he patient heard | E3 |
| To give the sanction still seemed loth | Q3 |
| But Narad Muni took the word | E3 |
| Bless thee my child 'Tis not for us | R3 |
| To question the Almighty will | S |
| Though cloud on cloud loom ominous | R3 |
| In gentle rain they may distil | S |
| At this the monarch Be it so | R |
| I sanction what my friend approves | S3 |
| All praise to Him whom praise we owe | R |
| My child shall wed the youth she loves | T3 |
Toru Dutt
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