Broken, Broken, Sad Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABCCDEFGA HIJK L| I was alone you see in this dark abysmal sea | A |
| as far as I could see | A |
| There were waves crashing amidst the storm thunder and lightning in the sky | B |
| menacing lightning | C |
| Every strike revealed what I was hiding | C |
| in these murky waters and every noise told me it was futile | D |
| Give into the push and the pull | E |
| Go deeper it's warmer there you'll find out you love it | F |
| And in the end isn't that what you wanted | G |
| Pushing and pulling me | A |
| - | |
| But then again I wasn't looking for peace | H |
| Maybe I was the one who brought myself here | I |
| Fooled you deceived you and played a part | J |
| Maybe I wore a mask | K |
| - | |
| Because underneath it all was broken broken and sad | L |
Tinita Pram
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 12/27/2020
Poet's note: This is my first poem that I have written. It is about the fact that everyone has issues or is struggling with something. It is also about how other people see you versus what is actually happening in your life.
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