Death Seems Better. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABC D AEDFA D DDADDGAHIJ D KLAMN A OGPQ D| Their cries weren't being heard they mumbled | A |
| the draconian world always overcomed | A |
| a batch of whys some trembling didn't help | B |
| blaming the people but we are the people | C |
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| in the eyes of many death seemed better | D |
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| They fought but their aging weapons failed | A |
| they crunched their fists and raised their voices | E |
| refused defeat but had to surrender | D |
| good enough they weren't tried acting upon | F |
| the current marking their words with acerbity | A |
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| but still in the end death seemed better | D |
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| They felt agony like no other | D |
| some couldn't survive the pain but why ohh father | D |
| went down on their knees and again beseeched | A |
| look around dear sis dear brother | D |
| we're vanquished one way or another | D |
| Their bodies are too weak our Dear one | G |
| atleast amongst the gone a thousand souls survived | A |
| treacherous memories stained living minds | H |
| tears running down their cheeks becoming a norm | I |
| might as well give away your bodies and set your souls free | J |
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| because death seems better | D |
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| Some chose the road of courage | K |
| whining was for the weak | L |
| where did they end up ohh lord | A |
| bless their fearless minds and brave hearts | M |
| but to those with no hope | N |
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| death became their one way out | A |
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| They have been torturing their tangible temples | O |
| to creat a harmonious generation | G |
| the future and minds of marvelous creations | P |
| but to those who suffered long enough | Q |
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| Death seemed better | D |
Tebello Ramaele
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Poet's note: This poem personal , this relates exactly to me when I was at my lowest point in life , feeling worthless and questioning my existence, where I had lost all hope , so close to giving up , but i realized there's a lot to live for, there's a lot that still has to change and I wanna be part of that change
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