Tommy's Dead Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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YOU may give over plough boysA
You may take the gear to the steadB
All the sweat o' your brow boysA
Will never get beer and breadB
The seed's waste I know boysA
There's not a blade will grow boysA
'Tis cropped out I trow boysA
And Tommy's deadB
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Send the colt to fair boysA
He's going blind as I saidB
My old eyes can't bear boysA
To see him in the shedB
The cow's dry and spare boysA
She's neither here nor there boysA
I doubt she's badly breadB
Stop the mill to morn boysA
There'll be no more corn boysA
Neither white nor redB
There's no sign of grass boysA
You may sell the goat and the ass boysA
The land's not what it was boysA
And the beasts must be fedB
You may turn Peg away boysA
You may pay off old NedB
We've had a dull day boysA
And Tommy's deadB
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Move my chair on the floor boysA
Let me turn my headB
She's standing there in the door boysA
Your sister WinifredC
Take her away from me boysA
Your sister WinifredC
Move me round in my place boysA
Let me turn my headB
Take her away from me boysA
As she lay on here death bedB
The bones of her thin face boysA
As she lay on her death bedB
I don't know how it be boysA
When all's done and saidB
But I see her looking at me boysA
Whenever I turn my headB
Out of the big oak tree boysA
Out of the garden bedB
And the lily as pale as she boysA
And the rose that used to be redB
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There's something not right boysA
But I think it's not in my headB
I've kept my precious sight boysA
The Lord be hallow dD
Outside and inE
The ground is cold to my treadB
The hills are wizen and thinE
The sky is shrivelled and shredB
The hedges down by the loanF
I can count them bone by boneF
The leaves are open and spreadB
But I see the teeth of the landG
And hands like a dead man's handG
And the eyes of a dead man's headB
There's nothing but cinders and sandG
The rat and the mouse have fedB
And the summer's empty and coldH
Over valley and woldH
Wherever I turn my headB
There's a mildew and a mouldH
The sun's going out overheadB
And I'm very oldH
And Tommy's deadB
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What am I staying for boysA
You're all born and bredB
'Tis fifty years and more boysA
Since wife and I were wedB
And she'd gone before boysA
And Tommy's deadB
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She was always sweet boysA
Upon his curly headB
She knew she'd never see't boysA
And she stole off to bedB
I've been siting up alone boysA
For he'd come home he saidB
But it's time I was gone boysA
For Tommy's deadB
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Put the shutters up boysA
Bring out the beer and breadB
Make haste and sup boysA
For my eyes are heavy as leadB
There's something wrong i' the cup boysA
There's something ill wi' the breadB
I don't care to sup boysA
And Tommy's deadB
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I'm not right I doubt boysA
I've such a sleepy headB
I shall nevermore be stout boysA
You may carry me to bedB
What are you about boysA
The prayers are all saidB
The fire's raked out boysA
And Tommy's deadB
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The stairs are too steep boysA
You may carry me to the headB
The night's dark and deep boysA
Your mother's long in bedB
'Tis time to go to sleep boysA
And Tommy's deadB
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I'm not used to a kiss boysA
You may shake my hand insteadB
All things go amiss boysA
You may lay me where she is boysA
And I'll rest my old headB
'Tis a poor world this boysA
And Tommy's deadB

Sydney Thompson Dobell



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