Odd Feelings Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCCDEFG HIJKLM| My shameful youthness I'm tired of living with you | A |
| After those many kisses I made | B |
| now my lips are still hungry for more | C |
| Still they're thirsty like a gull dying on a seashore | C |
| Prayin' for the last pure drop of water to enter through it's neck | D |
| It still incompletes me | E |
| It makes me the sky of nightfall | F |
| Pushin' me towards the gloaming adulthood | G |
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| After all those fleshes I touched all those air I breathed | H |
| I'm still feeling cold I'm still feeling hungry for more air | I |
| After all the stars shined my sky seems empty now | J |
| I shattered my dusk I'm livin' deplorable day | K |
| Just waiting for a hopeful dawn | L |
| I'm just waiting to see if there's a star of my kind still left | M |
Shambhu Kattel
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