Give Your Heart To The Hawks Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A B C D E FG HIJKLMNOPQFRSTUVPWXY ZWRSK W A2 W B2 C2 W F D2 W E2 SY C2 F2G2 H2Y D2 I2 D2J2 F E2 S K2F L FL2 M2 L2 L2 N2 O2 W FW D P2 WQ2R2 L2D2 YD P2S2 WH L2C2 WD A2W WD WS T2L2 H L2FWD2 WWW U2 KV2 FH YW L2WV WD2 WW W2X2 H2 WYWH2Y2 L2Z2 WW HWWA3W F FH2 H L2 L2P2 B3 H2C3 HYU2

he apples hung until a wind at the equinoxA
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That heaped the beach with black weed filled the dry grassB
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Under the old trees with rosy fruitC
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In the morning Fayne Fraser gathered the sound ones into aD
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basketE
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The bruised ones into a pan One place they lay so thicklyF
She knelt to reach themG
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Her husband's brother passingH
Along the broken fence of the stubble fieldI
His quick brown eyes took in one moving glanceJ
A little gopher snake at his feet flowing through the stubbleK
To gain the fence and Fayne crouched after applesL
With her mop of red hair like a glowing coalM
Against the shadow in the garden The small shapely reptileN
Flowed into a thicket of dead thistle stalksO
Around a fence post but its tail was not hiddenP
The young man drew it all out and as the coilQ
Whipped over his wrist smiled at it he stepped carefullyF
Across the sag of the wire When Fayne looked upR
His hand was hidden she looked over her shoulderS
And twitched her sunburnt lips from small white teethT
To answer the spark of malice in his eyes but turnedU
To the apples intent again Michael looked downV
At her white neck rarely touched by the sunP
But now the cinnabar colored hair fell off from itW
And her shoulders in the light blue shirt and long legs like a boy'sX
Bare ankled in blue jean trousers the country wearY
He stooped quietly and slipped the small cool snakeZ
Up the blue denim leg Fayne screamed and writhedW
Clutching her thigh 'Michael you beast ' She stood upR
And stroked her leg with little sharp cries the slender invaderS
Fell down her ankleK
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Fayne snatched for it and missedW
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Michael stood by rejoicing his rather smallA2
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Finely cut features in a dance of delightW
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Fayne with one sweep flung at his faceB2
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All the bruised and half spoiled apples in the panC2
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A fragrant volley and while he staggered under itW
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The hat fallen from his head she found one thoroughlyF
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Soft rotten brown in the long white grass and threwD2
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For the crown of his dark head but perfectly missedW
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Crying 'Quits We're even ' They stood and warily smiled at eachE2
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otherS
In the heavy sweet apple airY
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The garden was sunken lower thanC2
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the little fields it had many fragrancesF2
And its own shadow while the cows lay in the stream bed largeG2
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sycamore leaves dropped on their flanks the yellowH2
Heads of the hills quivered with sun and the straining sea glareY
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Fayne said 'Where did it go poor thing '-
Looking for the little serpent Michael said gravely 'That's toD2
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remember me by I wish I could do worseI2
I'm going away ' 'What ' 'From here again '-
'Oh no ' 'I am though ' 'No Michael '-
'Freckles ' he answered 'didn't it ever occur to youD2
That it's fairly dull here I'm going up to town againJ2
I've got to earn money and spend it and hear the motors '-
She said dismally 'What about me Who'll there be to talk to '-
'Lance of course ' 'I love him dearly he's not fun exactlyF
He wouldn't stick a rattlesnake up my leg '-
'Gopher snake ' he shouted They stood and laughed at eachE2
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otherS
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And Michael 'I was over the ridge to Drunken Charlie'sK2
Fixing up a little party for SaturdayF
There'll be a moon in the evening I leave Monday '-
Fayne said unhappily 'Help me pick up the applesL
I poured on you '-
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Michael was taking Mary AbbeyF
The Dolmans came and Will Howard with two girlsL2
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And Leo Ramirez with his sister Nell so that the youthM2
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Of the coast was all there They met at Erasers'L2
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And crossed the ridge and were picketing the horsesL2
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Where they could ride no farther on the airy brinkN2
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Above the great slides of the thousand foot cliffO2
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They were very gay colorful mites on the edge of the worldW
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The men divided the pack to carryF
Lance Eraser being strongest took mostW
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Far down below theD
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broad ocean burned like a vast cat's eyeP2
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Pupilled by the track of sun but eastward beyond the whiteW
grassed hump of the ridge the day moon stood bleakQ2
And badly shaped face of stained clay above the limestone fangR2
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of one of the Ventana mountainsL2
Just its own color Lance looking back saw his wife talking toD2
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Michael her cinnabar colored hairY
Like a flag of life against the pale east That moment he saw theD
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horses plunging against the skyP2
And heard a noise like a sharp head of water from a narrow pipeS2
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a girl cried outW
Lance dropped his pack and returned Will Howard was lookingH
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for stonesL2
But found none but Lance found a burnt fence post relic of anC2
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ancient fire The snake lay with raised headW
The rattle of its tail making that noise of sharp water running aD
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big rattler but very smallA2
At bay in the circle of the laughing men Lance struck for its headW
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but the snake that moment struck at the rope's endW
That Michael was flicking at it so that Lance's blow failed theD
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fence post broke to bits in his handW
The snake not harmed then Michael laughing with pleasureS
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whipped the creature to death with the doubled ropeT2
And set his heel on the head Lance damned all rotten wood hisL2
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blond face flushingH
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Dark through the sunburn Michael cut off the victim'sL2
Tail with the ten rattles to give to MaryF
The other young men quieted the horses and caughtW
One that had dragged away the bush it was tied toD2
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Lance would not wait he picked up his pack and wentW
Alone down the zigzag path but after a momentW
His temper clearedW
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Far down short of the cat's eye ocean theyU2
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saw like a brown pebbleK
Drunken Charlie's hut in a gorge of the cliff a feather of smokeV2
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and his boat like a split berryF
Of bladdery seaweed up the thin strand and Lance stood waitingH
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down the wild cliff side his light brown hairY
Golden with sun his hat and the pack laid down The warm windW
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up the mountain was wild with fragranceL2
Chiefly the scent of the chiya bushes that wear rosettes of seedW
Strung on the stem The girls squealed as they scrambled downV
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when the brittle trap rock broke underfootW
Small fragments ran over on the next below When they came toD2
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the foot of the cliff Michael said 'Now ' and offeredW
A bottle hot from his pocket 'It's time ' Mary Abbey refusedW
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it but the others drank from mouth to mouthW2
Stinging fire from the slobbered bottle neckX2
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The sun was lowH2
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But had played all day on this southwestwardW
Cliff over the burning glass water and the airY
Still swirled with heat the headland of Eraser's PointW
Stopped off the trade wind here Fayne Fraser a little dizzilyH2
Looked seaward left of the blazing sun track and saw the trackY2
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of the northwest gale and the running wavesL2
Like an endless army of horse with banners going by offshoreZ2
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her eyes followed them a ruled line southwardW
Of violent water converging toward the bronze headland beyondW
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headland of the mountain coast and someone was sayingH
'It's hot we'll swim ' 'Before we eat ' someone saidW
The girls twittered together and clustered northwardW
To a little cove beyond a fair spit of rockA3
The men remained on this sideW
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Fayne undressed beside MaryF
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AbbeyF
And was careful of words because she'd sucked from the bottleH2
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more than she meant to and had small experience of drinkingH
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She said carefully 'Where did those girls of Will Howard'sL2
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come from ' 'Nina told me ' she answered 'waitressesL2
Down from the city on their vacation ' 'Honestly are they IP2
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guessed it ' 'No ' Mary said 'they're nice girls '-
'That yellow haired one she's bad ' 'No ' Mary said FayneB3
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said 'Did you see her face when she looked at MichaelH2
Across that bottle ' 'Oh no ' Mary answered ' Well AreC3
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you ready Mary Let's go '-
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They limped down to the waves giggling and wincingH
Fayne had tied a broad handkerchief around her hairY
To shed the sprayU2

Robinson Jeffers



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