Poem With Refrains Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBBBCD EFGHIJHKK LM NOJP QPR STUVB WFBPXRYFZA2B2 BXC2D2BPE2RF2RG2RH2I 2J2K2K2B2 L2HM2N2O2P2Q2Q2Q2Q2 R2S2Q2Q2T2U2Q2V2W2Q2 Q2Q2S2Q2 S2S2S2S2The opening scene The yellow coal fed fog | A |
Uncurling over the tainted city river | B |
A young girl rowing and her anxious father | B |
Scavenging for corpses Funeral meats The clever | B |
Abandoned orphan The great athletic killer | B |
Sulking in his tent As though all stories began | C |
With someone dying | D |
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When her mother died | E |
My mother refused to attend the funeral | F |
In fact she sulked in her tent all through the year | G |
Of the old lady's dying I don't know why | H |
She said because she loved her mother so much | I |
She couldn't bear to see the way the doctors | J |
Or her father or someone was letting her mother die | H |
Follow your saint follow with accents sweet | K |
Haste you sad notes fall at her flying feet | K |
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She fogs things up she scavenges the taint | L |
Possibly that's the reason I write these poems | M |
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But they did speak on the phone Wept and argued | N |
So fiercely one or the other often cut off | O |
A sentence by hanging up in rage like lovers | J |
But all that year she never saw her face | P |
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They lived on the same block four doors apart | Q |
Absence my presence is strangeness my grace | P |
With them that walk against me is my sun | R |
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Synagogue is a word I never heard | S |
We called it shul the Yiddish word for school | T |
Elms terra cotta the ocean a few blocks east | U |
Lay institution she taught me we didn't think | V |
God lived in it The rabbi is just a teacher | B |
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But what about the hereditary priests | W |
Descendants of the Cohanes of the Temple | F |
Like Walter Holtz I called him Uncle Walter | B |
When I was small A big man with a face | P |
Just like a boxer dog or a cartoon sergeant | X |
She told me whenever he helped a pretty woman | R |
Try on a shoe in his store he'd touch her calf | Y |
And ask her How does that feel I was too little | F |
To get the point but pretended to understand | Z |
Desire be steady hope is your delight | A2 |
An orb wherein no creature can ever be sorry | B2 |
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She didn't go to my bar mitzvah either | B |
I can't say why she was there and then she wasn't | X |
I looked around before I mounted the steps | C2 |
To chant that babble and the speech the rabbi wrote | D2 |
And there she wasn't and there was Uncle Walter | B |
The Cohane frowning with his doggy face | P |
She's missing her own son's musaf Maybe she just | E2 |
Doesn't like rituals Afterwards she had a reason | R |
I don't remember I wasn't upset the truth | F2 |
Is I had decided to be the clever orphan | R |
Some time before By now it's all a myth | G2 |
What is a myth but something that seems to happen | R |
Always for the first time over and over again | H2 |
And ten years later she missed my brother's too | I2 |
I'm sorry I think it was something about a hat | J2 |
Hot sun cool fire tempered with sweet air | K2 |
Black shade fair nurse shadow my white hair | K2 |
Shine sun burn fire breathe air and ease me | B2 |
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She sees the minister of the Nation of Islam | L2 |
On television though she's half blind in one eye | H |
His bow tie is lime his jacket crocodile green | M2 |
Vigorously he denounces the Jews who traded in slaves | N2 |
The Jews who run the newspapers and the banks | O2 |
I see what this guy is mad about now she says | P2 |
It must have been some Jew that sold him the suit | Q2 |
And the same wind sang and the same wave whitened | Q2 |
And or ever the garden's last petals were shed | Q2 |
In the lips that had whispered the eyes that had lightened | Q2 |
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But when they unveiled her mother's memorial stone | R2 |
Gathered at the graveside one year after the death | S2 |
According to custom while we were standing around | Q2 |
About to begin the prayers her car appeared | Q2 |
It was a black car the ground was deep in snow | T2 |
My mother got out and walked toward us across | U2 |
The field of gravestones capped with snow her coat | Q2 |
Black as the car and they waited to start the prayers | V2 |
Until she arrived I think she enjoyed the drama | W2 |
I can't remember if she prayed or not | Q2 |
But that may be the way I'll remember her best | Q2 |
Dark figure awaited attended aware apart | Q2 |
The present time upon time pass euml d striketh | S2 |
With Phoebus's wandering course the earth is graced | Q2 |
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The air still moves and by its moving cleareth | S2 |
The fire up ascends and planets feedeth | S2 |
The water passeth on and all lets weareth | S2 |
The earth stands still yet change of changes breedeth | S2 |
Robert Pinsky
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