The White Comrade Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCCDB ECEFFEG FHAFAIJJKIK LMLMLNNOOPBBPFF QQRRSSTQTEUUB VWXXEWYWYZZEA2B2B2A2 JB2BJBJB2SESEYC2C2Under our curtain of fire | A |
Over the clotted clods | B |
We charged to be withered to reel | C |
And despairingly wheel | C |
When the bugles bade us retire | D |
From the terrible odds | B |
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As we ebbed with the battle tide | E |
Fingers of red hot steel | C |
Suddenly closed on my side | E |
I fell and began to pray | F |
I crawled on my hands and lay | F |
Where a shallow crater yawned wide | E |
Then I swooned | G |
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When I woke it was yet day | F |
Fierce was the pain of my wound | H |
But I saw it was death to stir | A |
For fifty paces away | F |
Their trenches were | A |
In torture I prayed for the dark | I |
And the stealthy step of my friend | J |
Who stanch to the very end | J |
Would creep to the danger zone | K |
And offer his life as a mark | I |
To save my own | K |
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Night fell I heard his tread | L |
Not stealthy but firm and serene | M |
As if my comrade's head | L |
Were lifted far from that scene | M |
Of passion and pain and dread | L |
As if my comrade's heart | N |
In carnage took no part | N |
As if my comrade's feet | O |
Were set on some radiant street | O |
Such as no darkness might haunt | P |
As if my comrade's eyes | B |
No deluge of flame could surprise | B |
No death and destruction daunt | P |
No red beaked bird dismay | F |
Nor sight of decay | F |
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Then in the bursting shells' dim light | Q |
I saw he was clad in white | Q |
For a moment I thought that I saw the smock | R |
Of a shepherd in search of his flock | R |
Alert were the enemy too | S |
And their bullets flew | S |
Straight at a mark no bullet could fail | T |
For the seeker was tall and his robe was bright | Q |
But he did not flee nor quail | T |
Instead with unhurrying stride | E |
He came | U |
And gathering my tall frame | U |
Like a child in his arms | B |
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I slept | V |
And awoke | W |
From a blissful dream | X |
In a cave by a stream | X |
My silent comrade had bound my side | E |
No pain now was mine but a wish that I spoke | W |
A mastering wish to serve this man | Y |
Who had ventured through hell my doom to revoke | W |
As only the truest of comrades can | Y |
I begged him to tell me how best I might aid him | Z |
And urgently prayed him | Z |
Never to leave me whatever betide | E |
When I saw he was hurt | A2 |
Shot through the hands that were clasped in prayer | B2 |
Then as the dark drops gathered there | B2 |
And fell in the dirt | A2 |
The wounds of my friend | J |
Seemed to me such as no man might bear | B2 |
Those bullet holes in the patient hands | B |
Seemed to transcend | J |
All horrors that ever these war drenched lands | B |
Had known or would know till the mad world's end | J |
Then suddenly I was aware | B2 |
That his feet had been wounded too | S |
And dimming the white of his side | E |
A dull stain grew | S |
You are hurt White Comrade I cried | E |
His words I already foreknew | Y |
These are old wounds said he | C2 |
But of late they have troubled me | C2 |
Robert Haven Schauffler
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