The White Comrade Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCCDB ECEFFEG FHAFAIJJKIK LMLMLNNOOPBBPFF QQRRSSTQTEUUB VWXXEWYWYZZEA2B2B2A2 JB2BJBJB2SESEYC2C2

Under our curtain of fireA
Over the clotted clodsB
We charged to be withered to reelC
And despairingly wheelC
When the bugles bade us retireD
From the terrible oddsB
-
As we ebbed with the battle tideE
Fingers of red hot steelC
Suddenly closed on my sideE
I fell and began to prayF
I crawled on my hands and layF
Where a shallow crater yawned wideE
Then I swoonedG
-
When I woke it was yet dayF
Fierce was the pain of my woundH
But I saw it was death to stirA
For fifty paces awayF
Their trenches wereA
In torture I prayed for the darkI
And the stealthy step of my friendJ
Who stanch to the very endJ
Would creep to the danger zoneK
And offer his life as a markI
To save my ownK
-
Night fell I heard his treadL
Not stealthy but firm and sereneM
As if my comrade's headL
Were lifted far from that sceneM
Of passion and pain and dreadL
As if my comrade's heartN
In carnage took no partN
As if my comrade's feetO
Were set on some radiant streetO
Such as no darkness might hauntP
As if my comrade's eyesB
No deluge of flame could surpriseB
No death and destruction dauntP
No red beaked bird dismayF
Nor sight of decayF
-
Then in the bursting shells' dim lightQ
I saw he was clad in whiteQ
For a moment I thought that I saw the smockR
Of a shepherd in search of his flockR
Alert were the enemy tooS
And their bullets flewS
Straight at a mark no bullet could failT
For the seeker was tall and his robe was brightQ
But he did not flee nor quailT
Instead with unhurrying strideE
He cameU
And gathering my tall frameU
Like a child in his armsB
-
I sleptV
And awokeW
From a blissful dreamX
In a cave by a streamX
My silent comrade had bound my sideE
No pain now was mine but a wish that I spokeW
A mastering wish to serve this manY
Who had ventured through hell my doom to revokeW
As only the truest of comrades canY
I begged him to tell me how best I might aid himZ
And urgently prayed himZ
Never to leave me whatever betideE
When I saw he was hurtA2
Shot through the hands that were clasped in prayerB2
Then as the dark drops gathered thereB2
And fell in the dirtA2
The wounds of my friendJ
Seemed to me such as no man might bearB2
Those bullet holes in the patient handsB
Seemed to transcendJ
All horrors that ever these war drenched landsB
Had known or would know till the mad world's endJ
Then suddenly I was awareB2
That his feet had been wounded tooS
And dimming the white of his sideE
A dull stain grewS
You are hurt White Comrade I criedE
His words I already foreknewY
These are old wounds said heC2
But of late they have troubled meC2

Robert Haven Schauffler



Rate:
(1)



Poem topics: , Print This Poem , Rhyme Scheme

Submit Spanish Translation
Submit German Translation
Submit French Translation
<< Scum O' The Earth Poem Next Poem


Write your comment about The White Comrade poem by Robert Haven Schauffler


 
Best Poems of Robert Haven Schauffler

Recent Interactions*

This poem was read 7 times,

This poem was added to the favorite list by 0 members,

This poem was voted by 0 members.

(* Interactions only in the last 7 days)

New Poems

Popular Poets