Excerpt - Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABBCD EEFFGGHHBBI JJK LLMMNNB BBBOOMMLLPPLLBB MM BB BB QQ II P BBR B SSQ OOT'This famous wicked little tale | A |
Should never have been put on sale | A |
It is a mystery to me | B |
Why loving parents cannot see | B |
That this is actually a book | C |
About a brazen little crook ' | D |
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' Now just imagine how you'd feel | E |
If you had cooked a lovely meal | E |
Delicious porridge steaming hot | F |
Fresh coffee in the coffee pot | F |
With maybe toast and marmalade | G |
The table beautifully laid | G |
One place for you and one for dad | H |
Another for your little lad | H |
Then dad cries 'Golly gosh Gee whizz | B |
'Oh cripes How hot this porridge is | B |
'Let's take a walk along the street | I |
'Until it's cool enough to eat ' | - |
He adds 'An early morning stroll | J |
'Is good for people on the whole | J |
'It makes your appetite improve | K |
'It also helps your bowels move ' | - |
No proper wife would dare to question | L |
Such a sensible suggestion | L |
Above all not at breakfast time | M |
When men are seldom at their prime | M |
No sooner are you down the road | N |
Than Goldilocks that little toad | N |
That nosey thieving little louse | B |
Comes sneaking in your empty house ' | - |
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' Here comes the next catastrophe | B |
Most educated people choose | B |
To rid themselves of socks and shoes | B |
Before they clamber into bed | O |
But Goldie didn't give a shred | O |
Her filthy shoes were thick with grime | M |
And mud and mush and slush and slime | M |
Worse still upon the heel of one | L |
Was something that a dog had done | L |
I say once more what would you think | P |
If all this horrid dirt and stink | P |
Was smeared upon your eiderdown | L |
By this revolting little clown | L |
The famous story has no clues | B |
To show the girl removed her shoes | B |
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Oh what a tale of crime on crime | M |
Let's check it for a second time | M |
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Crime One the prosecution's case | B |
She breaks and enters someone's place | B |
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Crime Two the prosecutor notes | B |
She steals a bowl of porridge oats | B |
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Crime Three She breaks a precious chair | Q |
Belonging to the Baby Bear | Q |
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Crime Four She smears each spotless sheet | I |
With filthy messes from her feet | I |
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A judge would say without a blink | P |
'Ten years hard labour in the clink ' | - |
But in the book as you will see | B |
The little beast gets off scot free | B |
While tiny children near and far | R |
Shout 'Goody good Hooray Hurrah ' | - |
'Poor darling Goldilocks ' they say | B |
'Thank goodness that she got away ' | - |
Myself I think I'd rather send | S |
Young Goldie to a sticky end | S |
'Oh daddy ' cried the Baby Bear | Q |
'My porridge gone It isn't fair ' | - |
'Then go upstairs ' the Big Bear said | O |
'Your porridge is upon the bed | O |
'But as it's inside mademoiselle | T |
'You'll have to eat her up as well ' | - |
Roald Dahl
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