Part 5 Of Trout Fishing In America Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A B C D E F G H I J G K L A G F M G N O P Q R S K T U V W X O G Y T G Z A2 G A2 B2 C2 T X D2 Q A Y E2 F2 G2 G H2 Y A I2 J2 G A Y K2 L2

WORSEWICKA
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Worsewick Hot Springs was nothing fancy Somebody put someB
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boards across the creek That was itC
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The boards dammed up the creek enough to form a hugeD
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bathtub there and the creek flowed over the top of the boardsE
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invited like a postcard to the ocean a thousand miles awayF
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As I said Worsewick was nothing fancy not like theG
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places where the swells go There were no buildings aroundH
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We saw an old shoe lying by the tubI
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The hot springs came down off a hill and where they flowedJ
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there was a bright orange scum through the sagebrush TheG
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hot springs flowed into the creek right there at the tub andK
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that' s where it was niceL
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We parked our car on the dirt road and went down and tookA
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off our clothes then we took off the baby's clothes and theG
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deerflies had at us until we got into the water and then theyF
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stoppedM
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There was a green slime growing around the edges of theG
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tub and there were dozens of dead fish floating in our bathN
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Their bodies had been turned white by death like frost onO
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iron doors Their eyes were large and stiffP
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The fish had made the mistake of going down the creek tooQ
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far and ending up in hot water singing When you lose yourR
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money learn to loseS
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We played and relaxed in the water The green slime andK
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the dead fish played and relaxed with us and flowed out overT
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us and entwined themselves about usU
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Splashing around in that hot water with my woman I beganV
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to get ideas as they say After a while I placed my body inW
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such a position in the water that the baby could not see myX
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hard onO
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I did this by going deeper and deeper in the water like aG
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dinosaur and letting the green slime and dead fish cover meY
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overT
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My woman took the baby out of the water and gave her aG
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bottle and put her back in the car The baby was tired It wasZ
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really time for her to take a napA2
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My woman took a blanket out of the car and covered up theG
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windows that faced the hot springs She put the blanket ontopA2
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of the car and then lay rocks on the blanket to hold it in placeB2
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I remember her standing there by the carC2
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Then she came back to the water and the deerflies wereT
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at her and then it was my turn After a while she said IX
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don't have my diaphragm with me and besides it wouldn'tD2
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work in the water anyway I think it's a good idea if youQ
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don't come inside me What do you thinkA
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I thought this over and said all right I didn't want anyY
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more kids for a long time The green slime and dead fishE2
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were all about our bodiesF2
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I remember a dead fish floated under her neck I waitedG2
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for it to come up on the other side and it came up on theG
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other sideH2
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Worsewick was nothing fancyY
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Then I came and just cleared her in a split secondlikeA
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an airplane in the movies pulling out of a nosedive and sailI2
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ing over the roof of a schoolJ2
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My sperm came out into the water unaccustomed to theG
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light and instantly it became a misty stringy kind of thingA
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and swirled out like a falling star and I saw a dead fishcomeY
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forward and float into my sperm bending it in the middleK2
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His eyes were stiff like ironL2

Richard Brautigan



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