Diary Of A Dying Man Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFFGHIJKLMNGOPDQ RSTDKUVWXMFG

There is a space between life and deathA
A fine line without silver liningB
It's filled with despair and feelings of crapC
There is a rope on my neckD
So tight I feel it sinking inE
Somehow I am not dead well not yetF
I'm suppose to feel remorse and regretF
But the only regret I have is not dying soonerG
I can't yell for help not while I'm still aliveH
I'll wait till I'm nothing but a floating bagI
Even so my language is of no senseJ
It's my soul it is just standing right thereK
and watching tears from a hollow hole in my socketsL
Well I wish I could talk right now even for secondsM
I'd tell it I'm happy and I'm glad I'm going to dieN
The rope on my neck sinking in deeperG
I can bearly breathe this weird horrid toneO
Like a dying suffocating wild hogP
Through my skin and through the bruises on my neckD
My body is turning pale I know it's in terrible painQ
It'll end soon trust me it'll soon endR
I see the flection through the puddle of blood on the floorS
I look pretty weird like superman in his blue and red costumeT
With kryptonite on his neckD
my soul why are you just standing thereK
Is it my dry voice and red eyesU
Or the way my body like a swinging ropeV
Finds a wall after wall bashing like a wrecking ballW
Is it why you're still here does this pain fascinate youX
Find open clouds it's almost secondsM
I don't feel remorse or regretF
The only regret I have is not dying soonerG

Raynolds (poeticrae) Moseamedi

Poet's note: Simply the feelings of a man tired of living.




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