Feel Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFDDGGHIJKLMNNDO PQR| Ever touched your phone hoping for a text | A |
| From your lover but only to find blue ticks | B |
| She's not responding to you buy yet she's online | C |
| Probably not for you | D |
| Do you ever feel like you're | E |
| Pushing your relationship to the edge | F |
| Like maybe she's no longer into you | D |
| But you keep on pushing her to tell you | D |
| Do you ever feel like telling her that | G |
| She means the world to you because you never did and now you feel it's too late for that | G |
| Do you know the feeling of burning tears | H |
| in your eyes that are not coming out | I |
| but they just there | J |
| Do you know the feeling of loneliness and depression | K |
| Have you ever felt single while you're in a relationship | L |
| Do you ever log into your WhatsApp and | M |
| Just stare to your phone hoping she'll respond | N |
| She will respond she will respond | N |
| she will respond but there's still those blue | D |
| Ticked texts she read and ignored | O |
| Do you ever read your old texts massages and make a wish | P |
| Wish you could rewind the clock | Q |
| So you can be happy again | R |
Pretty Mkhize
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 09/01/2020
Poet's note: On the 31st of August I wrote this poem to the LGBTQ community group on Facebook because I felt I needed to talk to someone and that all I could have said/asked. This is meant to express the pain I was feeling. Pain of ignorance
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