When The Old Man Smokes Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCBDEFE GHIHJKGK GLILMNON PQMQRKGK RSTSUVWV PXYXIZIZ GA2GA2B2KC2KIn the forenoon's restful quiet | A |
When the boys are off at school | B |
When the window lights are shaded | C |
And the chimney corner cool | B |
Then the old man seeks his armchair | D |
Lights his pipe and settles back | E |
Falls a dreaming as he draws it | F |
Till the smoke wreaths gather black | E |
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And the tear drops come a trickling | G |
Down his cheeks a silver flow | H |
Smoke or memories you wonder | I |
But you never ask him no | H |
For there 's something almost sacred | J |
To the other family folks | K |
In those moods of silent dreaming | G |
When the old man smokes | K |
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Ah perhaps he sits there dreaming | G |
Of the love of other days | L |
And of how he used to lead her | I |
Through the merry dance's maze | L |
How he called her little princess | M |
And to please her used to twine | N |
Tender wreaths to crown her tresses | O |
From the matrimony vine | N |
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Then before his mental vision | P |
Comes perhaps a sadder day | Q |
When they left his little princess | M |
Sleeping with her fellow clay | Q |
How his young heart throbbed and pained him | R |
Why the memory of it chokes | K |
Is it of these things he 's thinking | G |
When the old man smokes | K |
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But some brighter thoughts possess him | R |
For the tears are dried the while | S |
And the old worn face is wrinkled | T |
In a reminiscent smile | S |
From the middle of the forehead | U |
To the feebly trembling lip | V |
At some ancient prank remembered | W |
Or some long unheard of quip | V |
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Then the lips relax their tension | P |
And the pipe begins to slide | X |
Till in little clouds of ashes | Y |
It falls softly at his side | X |
And his head bends low and lower | I |
Till his chin lies on his breast | Z |
And he sits in peaceful slumber | I |
Like a little child at rest | Z |
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Dear old man there 's something sad'ning | G |
In these dreamy moods of yours | A2 |
Since the present proves so fleeting | G |
All the past for you endures | A2 |
Weeping at forgotten sorrows | B2 |
Smiling at forgotten jokes | K |
Life epitomized in minutes | C2 |
When the old man smokes | K |
Paul Laurence Dunbar
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