Save The Depressed Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A BCDE FEBC BGHC IJBC

Save the depressedA
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I'm faced with war internallyB
Burning into ashes from withinC
Groans of pain without voicesD
Indeed I'm dyingE
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Mixed feelings of inferiority complexF
No one to ask of my wellbeingE
Feelings of insecurity all around meB
Like a candle I'm waxing from withinC
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I'm at war with nobodyB
I'm at war with my feelingsG
I'm viewed as a warrior from my statureH
I'm a nursing baby from withinC
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Face covered with fake smilesI
Mind burning like brime stonesJ
Look like an apple outside of meB
But a burning furnace from withinC

Oyishose Sule
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 12/04/2021

Poet's note: I write this poem in respect to the depressed. I remember how depressed I was and the trauma attached to being depressed.




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