Drunken Unrequited Love Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABAC DEDF GHGI JGJK LMNM| my consciousness is slowly slipping away | A |
| like my love for the world | B |
| you I swear I can't do with away | A |
| like a knight with his sword | C |
| - | |
| I want to be very committed | D |
| like a Christian to his Bible | E |
| beside you forever I'll be seated | D |
| like a car idles | F |
| - | |
| I'll burn away my fragrance to the gods to let us be | G |
| and swim away lost in lovely dreams | H |
| just to show you we are meant to be | G |
| I'll prove to you by every means | I |
| - | |
| which is why I'm heartbroken to hear of your lovely demise | J |
| you said you don't love me | G |
| that your love for me is as far as the world to the skies | J |
| please I'm begging you I'm still on my knee ls | K |
| - | |
| now I'm left all alone once again with my liquor | L |
| I feel blood is dripping from my heart scars | M |
| angrily I've burnt and cursed my heart and her pictures | N |
| yet I can still see her in the stars | M |
Oluwadunjoye John Tobi
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 08/11/2025
Poet's note: This poignant poem is to capture the depths of unrequited love through vivid imagery and emotional turmoil, revealing a struggle between hope and despair.
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