Drowning Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEFGHH| Blinded favour covered the inner whispers | A |
| Closing my eyes on a brighter day | B |
| Set a trap in my darkest room | C |
| - | |
| You led me inside why not pick me up now | D |
| I'm drowning in the deepest mud of prehibbitive fear | E |
| Screaming to the peak of my voice | F |
| But nothing like your wings over me | G |
| So when I'm completely sunk know that | H |
| The mission is unaccomplished | H |
Okidi Gabriel Ronald
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 09/17/2020
Poet's note: The poem is about complete submission to others (friends). As in real life, a feeling of having great favour for your friends may lead you into traps as that even that friend may not be able to help you out of it though he/she is the one that led you to it. Towards the end of the poem, "So when I'm completely sunk, know that the mission is unaccomplished" means that, failure to stand with each other to the end, means your friendship/relationship didn't define it's reality since a real never splits during any situation.
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