As One Listens To The Rain Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHDIAJKLMNOPQA EJRSTEUVAWTUXUVDVAYZ A2B2DC2VD2VE2F2

Listen to me as one listens to the rainA
not attentive not distractedB
light footsteps thin drizzleC
water that is air air that is timeD
the day is still leavingE
the night has yet to arriveF
figurations of mistG
at the turn of the cornerH
figurations of timeD
at the bend in this pauseI
listen to me as one listens to the rainA
without listening hear what I sayJ
with eyes open inward asleepK
with all five senses awakeL
it's raining light footsteps a murmur of syllablesM
air and water words with no weightN
what we are and areO
the days and years this momentP
weightless time and heavy sorrowQ
listen to me as one listens to the rainA
wet asphalt is shiningE
steam rises and walks awayJ
night unfolds and looks at meR
you are you and your body of steamS
you and your face of nightT
you and your hair unhurried lightningE
you cross the street and enter my foreheadU
footsteps of water across my eyesV
listen to me as one listens to the rainA
the asphalt's shining you cross the streetW
it is the mist wandering in the nightT
it is the night asleep in your bedU
it is the surge of waves in your breathX
your fingers of water dampen my foreheadU
your fingers of flame burn my eyesV
your fingers of air open eyelids of timeD
a spring of visions and resurrectionsV
listen to me as one listens to the rainA
the years go by the moments returnY
do you hear the footsteps in the next roomZ
not here not there you hear themA2
in another time that is nowB2
listen to the footsteps of timeD
inventor of places with no weight nowhereC2
listen to the rain running over the terraceV
the night is now more night in the groveD2
lightning has nestled among the leavesV
a restless garden adrift go inE2
your shadow covers this pageF2

Octavio Paz



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