She Broke Away. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBA CDEE FGHG IJJK LLLL MNMM| It took seasons in the sun | A |
| To make her heart yearn | B |
| Though it didn't make me earn | B |
| But I thought it was fun | A |
| - | |
| Beautiful was the time | C |
| When love decided to tie | D |
| Even though I was nine | E |
| But I thought it was fine | E |
| - | |
| My heart stuck into hers | F |
| As we spent time with us | G |
| Though it wasn't a must | H |
| Out of love we did it for us | G |
| - | |
| Unfortunate begun to attack | I |
| Despite being in the act | J |
| We no longer got tact | J |
| And slowly we detached | K |
| - | |
| No longer was I able | L |
| When all was miserable | L |
| Love became inaudible | L |
| And it seemed impossible | L |
| - | |
| We all wanted to stay | M |
| Despite the bad days | N |
| But who was I to disobey | M |
| Her orders to break away | M |
Nuru Salim
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/29/2022
Poet's note: I wrote this poem after I broke up with my beloved, I wrote it for her as I recalled the past on how we had good times until all things fell apart.I wanted to express the feeling of sorrow of losing someone important.It means alot to me as it speaks how I feel after losing someone.
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