I Can't Take It No More. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFDD CDGDHI DJKLCMN| Glasses scattered | A |
| Widows broken | B |
| My heart is full of rage | C |
| I can't take it no more | D |
| I feel soo empty from the inside | E |
| My torn belly full of hungry worms | F |
| It can't sustain the pain no more | D |
| My heart full of rage can't beat no more | D |
| - | |
| The rage is breaking out of it's cage | C |
| I can't take it no more | D |
| The betrayal is eating up my brains | G |
| I can't think no more | D |
| After all the sacrifices | H |
| She still went back to her old ways | I |
| - | |
| My raged heart can't beat no more | D |
| My fibble legs have given in | J |
| A life has lost its meaning | K |
| Death the only salvation left | L |
| To escape this cage | C |
| This cage of guilt betrayal | M |
| And murder | N |
Nuru Salim
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/23/2022
Poet's note: The poem is about giving up a life due to miseries that accompanies it,the misery of hunger,the misery of heartbreaks,the misery of betrayal and pain.I write this poem to my beloved girlfriend when she left me for being financially unstable.I want to express the feeling of betrayal in relationships.It means alot to me as it expresses the feeling that I can't express through words but through a poem.
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