Success Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AB CDC EE CFC GG HH IJ

My success is just delayed and not deniedA
With this thought I never quit and always striveB
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For the right time is known only to divineC
I know that everything will soon be bestD
and perfectly fineC
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Great victories need immense sweat and blood to be put inE
And so I never let myself collapse and give inE
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Never matters who says and thinks what how you'll shineC
If you work hard with patienceF
Success is thineC
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Coz it comes to those who dissolve themselves to quench their thirstG
Rather than people who in tears get burstG
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At times you might be alone like the luminous star in the skyH
Yet keep your rays accessible for each passer byH
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Be welcoming for all critiques from whom you certainly will learnI
Get cut and polished like the diamond that glows like noneJ

Noor Ul Elmah Hasan
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 06/12/2020



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Gopal krishnan: Well said! Profound thought!
 
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