Staying At Ed's Place Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEF GBA DHIJ KLM NOPL QNN

I like being in your apartment and not disturbing anythingA
As in the woods I wouldn't want to move a treeB
or change the play of sun and shadow on the groundC
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The yellow kitchen stool belongs right thereD
against white plaster I haven't used your purple towelE
because I like the accidental cleft of shade you left in itF
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At your small six sided table covered with mysteriousG
dents in the wood like a dartboard I drink my coffeeB
from your brown mug I look into the clearingA
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of your high front room where sunlight slopes through bareD
window squares Your Afghanistan hammockH
a man sized cocoonI
slung from wall to wall your narrow desk and typewriterJ
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are the only furniture Each morning your light from the eastK
douses me where with folded legs I sit in your meadowL
a casual spread of brilliant carpets Like a cat or dogM
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I take a roll then stretched out flatN
in the center of color and pattern I listenO
to the remote growl of trucks over cobbles onP
Bethune Street belowL
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When I open my eyes I discover the peaceful blankQ
of the ceiling Its old paint layered surface is moonwhiteN
and trackless like the Sea of TranquillityN

May Swenson



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