You Look At Me While I Paint Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD AEFE GHH CI

Look at youA
Standing at the other sideB
Yet you watch meC
It was a bad dayD
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And here I am painting and thinking of youA
In my secret placeE
You smoke and drink vodka to kill boredomF
I use coloursE
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Look at us nowG
We still pursue each otherH
The clouds utter words we want to say to each otherH
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My love When you manifest in realityC
I become an alchemistI

Mary Zammit
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 07/28/2019



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