Elphin Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCBDB EFDFFF FGHGDI JBJBFB JKFKFK DLDLDL FMNMBM BJFJJJ FFAFOFThe eve was a burning copper | A |
The night was a boundless black | B |
Where wells of the lightning crumbled | C |
And boiled with blazing rack | B |
When I came to the coal black castle | D |
With the wild rain on my back | B |
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Thrice under its goblin towers | E |
Where the causey of rock was laid | F |
Thrice there at its spider portal | D |
My scornful bugle brayed | F |
But never a warder questioned | F |
An owl's was the answer made | F |
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When the heaven above was blistered | F |
One scald of blinding storm | G |
And the blackness clanged like a cavern | H |
Of iron where demons swarm | G |
I rode in the court of the castle | D |
With the shield upon my arm | I |
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My sword unsheathed and certain | J |
Of the visor of my casque | B |
My steel steps challenged the donjon | J |
My gauntlet should unmask | B |
But never a knight or varlet | F |
To stay or slay or ask | B |
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My heels on the stone ground iron | J |
My fists on the bolts clashed steel | K |
In the hall the roar of the torrent | F |
In the turret the thunder's peal | K |
And I found her there in the turret | F |
Alone by her spinning wheel | K |
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She spun the flax of a spindle | D |
And I wondered on her face | L |
She spun the flax of a spindle | D |
And I marvelled on her grace | L |
She spun the flax of a spindle | D |
And I watched a little space | L |
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But nerves of my manhood weakened | F |
The heart in my breast was wax | M |
Myself but the hide of an image | N |
Out stuffed with the hards of flax | M |
She spun and she smiled a spinning | B |
A spindle of blood red flax | M |
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She spun and she laughed a spinning | B |
The blood of my veins in a skein | J |
But I knew how the charm was mastered | F |
And snapped in the hissing vein | J |
So she wove but a fiery scorpion | J |
That writhed from her hands again | J |
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Fleeing in rain and in tempest | F |
Saw by the cataract's bed | F |
Cancers of ulcerous fire | A |
Wounds of a bloody red | F |
Its windows glare in the darkness | O |
Eyes of a dragon's head | F |
Madison Julius Cawein
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