Elphin Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCBDB EFDFFF FGHGDI JBJBFB JKFKFK DLDLDL FMNMBM BJFJJJ FFAFOF

The eve was a burning copperA
The night was a boundless blackB
Where wells of the lightning crumbledC
And boiled with blazing rackB
When I came to the coal black castleD
With the wild rain on my backB
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Thrice under its goblin towersE
Where the causey of rock was laidF
Thrice there at its spider portalD
My scornful bugle brayedF
But never a warder questionedF
An owl's was the answer madeF
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When the heaven above was blisteredF
One scald of blinding stormG
And the blackness clanged like a cavernH
Of iron where demons swarmG
I rode in the court of the castleD
With the shield upon my armI
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My sword unsheathed and certainJ
Of the visor of my casqueB
My steel steps challenged the donjonJ
My gauntlet should unmaskB
But never a knight or varletF
To stay or slay or askB
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My heels on the stone ground ironJ
My fists on the bolts clashed steelK
In the hall the roar of the torrentF
In the turret the thunder's pealK
And I found her there in the turretF
Alone by her spinning wheelK
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She spun the flax of a spindleD
And I wondered on her faceL
She spun the flax of a spindleD
And I marvelled on her graceL
She spun the flax of a spindleD
And I watched a little spaceL
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But nerves of my manhood weakenedF
The heart in my breast was waxM
Myself but the hide of an imageN
Out stuffed with the hards of flaxM
She spun and she smiled a spinningB
A spindle of blood red flaxM
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She spun and she laughed a spinningB
The blood of my veins in a skeinJ
But I knew how the charm was masteredF
And snapped in the hissing veinJ
So she wove but a fiery scorpionJ
That writhed from her hands againJ
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Fleeing in rain and in tempestF
Saw by the cataract's bedF
Cancers of ulcerous fireA
Wounds of a bloody redF
Its windows glare in the darknessO
Eyes of a dragon's headF

Madison Julius Cawein



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