The Green Field I Can't Run Through Anymore Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCC DDEF GGHH CCDD IIJJ KKLL MMNN OPQD BRSS

I gave you my hands when yours were tiredA
my time my dreams my burning fireB
I bent my pride just ti make you stayC
loving you more with each passing dayC
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But while I was busy choosing youD
you were choosing someone newD
I build us hope from broken partsE
you broke your promise and my heartF
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Now I wonder what all this meantG
the love the loss the years I spentG
Was I too much or not enoughH
for a love that gave up when things got toughH
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I've been striving every day in every wayC
just to satisfy you somedayC
Sacrifice was never all I could doD
I'd even catch ten thousand stars for youD
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It felt like a blazing dagger in my backI
a sudden force ready to crackI
Pressure building trapped insideJ
like a rock about to split wideJ
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I used to love running through field of greenK
they reminded me of you so cleanK
Now that same garden stings my sightL
as hatred slowly fills the lightL
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That green I once called peace and homeM
now stains my eyes wherever I roamM
What used to heal now cuts me deepN
memories I never asked to keepN
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I gave you love with open handsO
you answered it with broken plansP
I stayed honest I stayed tureQ
while lies kept gwoing around youD
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Still I carry what we wereB
even if it's painful event if it hurtsR
Loving you was never wrongS
trusting was truly wrongS

Lourd Fermalino
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/20/2026

Poet's note: I wrote this poem as requested by my friend, who is a senior of mine. He loves his girlfriend so much that he was willing to do anything for her, but they broke up because of cheating. My friend wanted to vent out his anger and the little love that was left in his heart, so he asked me to write the poem for him instead. This poem talks about willingness and the sacrifices we give for someone we love, even when it hurts. It also shows that if you truly love a person, sometimes all you can do is accept what happened.




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