Your Peaches Are Juicier Than Mine. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFFGHHIJHKLLMNO A

We re eating peachesA
A curvy line of fruit juiceB
Starts pouring down your chinC
Before I stuck out my tongueD
And lick your skin cleanE
The sunshine is dancing in your gazeF
Pretty green with a small hint of hazeF
The laughter rips out of my chestG
UncontrollablyH
But you lift up your hands and hold meH
In that second of silence redness creepsI
Onto my cheeks between your precious handsJ
And then you kiss meH
Lips soothing over mine like paper and rhymeK
But our eyes spring open my heart skips a beatL
Your gaze softens while my body is on heatL
Those soft lips of yours curl into a smileM
You had some peach on your lipsN
But who told you to stopO
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we end up eating each other s peachesA

Lilla Bajak
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 02/12/2024

Poet's note: You know the feeling, when you're joking around with your girlfriend in an ambiguous context and they end up rizzing you, so you're unable to control your estradiol levels? Well, me neither but that's why I wrote this poem.




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