By The Pyramid I Fall Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGEHIJDKGLMNDGO PQRSD

Flat on my faceA
Bones still intact no cracks no scratchesB
My face flat on the ground lips kissing the rough sands at the bottom of theC
pyramidD
And then I come to knowing too well the steps I tookE
With my eyes wide openF
Remembering each stride I made to get up thereG
Hearing each heavy breath I tookE
Pushing my body pulling my limbsH
Tearing my skin clawing through the sandI
Determined I had to in my dreams I had toJ
In my dream my mind saw the pinnacle of the pyramidD
A beautiful pyramid well structured designed to project false realitiesK
Enticing me to get up thereG
Maybe haunting meL
Or maybe warning me not to go up at allM
Yet I climbed the third time around the fourth a decade passedN
Still I climbed the pyramidD
I arrive I stand I see myself there I feel being there I am thereG
Each time I reach the pinnacleO
All the same it s flat and then it s pointy sharp as a bladeP
And then I hit the ground turning around hands flat on the groundQ
I could only see the bottom of the top from hereR
Each time I climb the cycle becomesS
All the way up and then face down at the bottom of the pyramidD

Laurinda Mapurazi
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 08/12/2020

Poet's note: I wrote the poem for myself. I kept feeling like I'm failing at everything I was doing in life.




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