Five Sayings Of Lal Ded Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A BCDEFDG A HIHIJ A KLFMG D NOFPQR D SDSDBTBT

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By a way I came but I went not by the wayB
While I was yet on the midst of the embankmentC
with its crazy bridges the day failed for meD
I looked within my poke and not a cowry came to handE
or atI was thereF
What shall I give for the ferry feeD
Translated by G GriersonG
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IIA
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Passionate with longing in mine eyesH
Searching wide and seeking nights and daysI
Lo' I beheld the Truthful One the WiseH
Here in mine own House to fill my gazeI
Translated by R C TempleJ
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IIIA
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Holy books will disappear and then only the mystic formula will remainK
When the mystic formula departed naught but mind was leftL
When the mind disappeared naught was left anywhereF
And a voice became merged within the VoidM
Translated by G GriersonG
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IVD
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You are the heaven and You are the earthN
You are the day and You are the nightO
You are all pervading airF
You are the sacred offering of rice and flowers and of waterP
You are Yourself all in allQ
What can I offer YouR
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VD
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With a thin rope of untwisted threadS
Tow I ever my boat o'er the seaD
Will God hear the prayers that I have saidS
Will he safely over carry meD
Water in a cup of unbaked clayB
Whirling and wasting my dizzy soulT
Slowly is filling to melt awayB
Oh how fain would I reach my goalT

Lalleshwari



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Dr. Avtar Krishna Gurtu: very nice indeed. I LOVE IT. Is its Hindi version available Is yes where. my email [email protected]
 

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