Parallel Dimensions Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHFIJKLGMHGM NOPQHFRRKLSMPSM ATUVEFGHFIJKWXMHVWM NOPQHFRRKWXMPVWM AFAEDYZA2RB2B2 C2D2AAE2 F2G2H2C2I2B2 B2J2AE2B2| In a parallel dimension | A |
| Where everything is perfect | B |
| No hate no war no injustice | C |
| Prevail only peace and happiness | D |
| A mother is in mourning | E |
| Her schizophrenic daughter | F |
| Slipped and fell and broke her leg | G |
| No nothing fatal But alas | H |
| That would have been better | F |
| Who would hire her now | I |
| Who would marry a cripple | J |
| For bones may heal and scars may fade | K |
| But memories don t and the fact remains | L |
| That she slipped and fell and broke her leg | G |
| Oh what a shame it was | M |
| To be the mother of a lass | H |
| Who slipped and fell and broke her leg | G |
| Oh What a shame it was | M |
| - | |
| In their neighbour s house the father weeps | N |
| Filled with sorrow and grief | O |
| His bipolar son accidentally had | P |
| Burnt his hand while cooking for a friend | Q |
| No nothing fatal But alas | H |
| That would have been better | F |
| His life was ruined he couldn t face society | R |
| How could he | R |
| For when wounds heal and scars fade | K |
| memories don t and the fact remains | L |
| that he accidentally had burnt his hand | S |
| Oh what a shame it was | M |
| To be the father of a lad | P |
| Who accidentally had burnt his hand | S |
| Oh What a shame it was | M |
| - | |
| In a less confusing dimension | A |
| Where everything made sense | T |
| where revolution was a daily phenomenon | U |
| and people were tolerant | V |
| A mother is in mourning | E |
| Her schizophrenic daughter | F |
| Slipped and fell and broke her leg | G |
| No nothing fatal But alas | H |
| That would have been better | F |
| Who would hire her now | I |
| Who would marry a cripple | J |
| For bones may heal and scars may fade | K |
| But fragile the mind and brain remain | W |
| The fact is she is mentally crippled | X |
| Oh what a shame it was | M |
| To be the mother of a lass | H |
| Whose mind bore the brunt | V |
| Of a chemical imbalance in her brain | W |
| Oh What a shame it was | M |
| - | |
| In their neighbour s house the father weeps | N |
| Filled with sorrow and grief | O |
| His bipolar son accidentally had | P |
| Burnt his hand while cooking for a friend | Q |
| No nothing fatal But alas | H |
| That would have been better | F |
| His life was ruined he couldn t face society | R |
| How could he | R |
| For when wounds heal and scars fade | K |
| Fragile the mind and brain remain | W |
| The fact is he is mentally crippled | X |
| Oh what a shame it was | M |
| To be the father of a lad | P |
| Whose mind bore the brunt | V |
| Of a chemical imbalance in his brain | W |
| Oh What a shame it was | M |
| - | |
| The less confusing dimension | A |
| I m sure it sounds familiar | F |
| But the parallel dimension | A |
| To me it sounds confusing | E |
| To you too if it sounds ridiculous | D |
| Then tell me why | Y |
| Why show off your battle scars | Z |
| But hide the pain trauma and distress | A2 |
| Why care for just your body | R |
| While neglecting your brain and mind | B2 |
| And in doing so pride why do you find | B2 |
| - | |
| Superficial wounds with ease they heal | C2 |
| The deepest cuts they need more care and time | D2 |
| Without attention they worsen | A |
| Over time turning into poison | A |
| That eats you from within | E2 |
| - | |
| None of it is your fault | F2 |
| It s nothing to be ashamed of | G2 |
| unlike what they ve told you | H2 |
| It s nothing that can t heal | C2 |
| It s not irreparable damage | I2 |
| It s a mere wound on your brain and mind | B2 |
| - | |
| Now would you be so kind | B2 |
| To let heal the battle wounds | J2 |
| You had kept so well hidden | A |
| No not just the ones on your skin | E2 |
| Also the ones on your brain and mind | B2 |
Krishnapriya Ramanathan
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Lydia: Reality composed as poetry. Good job.
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