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In a parallel dimension	A
Where everything is perfect	B
No hate no war no injustice	C
Prevail only peace and happiness	D
A mother is in mourning	E
Her schizophrenic daughter	F
Slipped and fell and broke her leg	G
No nothing fatal But alas	H
That would have been better	F
Who would hire her now	I
Who would marry a cripple	J
For bones may heal and scars may fade	K
But memories don t and the fact remains	L
That she slipped and fell and broke her leg	G
Oh what a shame it was	M
To be the mother of a lass	H
Who slipped and fell and broke her leg	G
Oh What a shame it was	M
	-
In their neighbour s house the father weeps	N
Filled with sorrow and grief	O
His bipolar son accidentally had	P
Burnt his hand while cooking for a friend	Q
No nothing fatal But alas	H
That would have been better	F
His life was ruined he couldn t face society	R
How could he	R
For when wounds heal and scars fade	K
memories don t and the fact remains	L
that he accidentally had burnt his hand	S
Oh what a shame it was	M
To be the father of a lad	P
Who accidentally had burnt his hand	S
Oh What a shame it was	M
	-
In a less confusing dimension	A
Where everything made sense	T
where revolution was a daily phenomenon	U
and people were tolerant	V
A mother is in mourning	E
Her schizophrenic daughter	F
Slipped and fell and broke her leg	G
No nothing fatal But alas	H
That would have been better	F
Who would hire her now	I
Who would marry a cripple	J
For bones may heal and scars may fade	K
But fragile the mind and brain remain	W
The fact is she is mentally crippled	X
Oh what a shame it was	M
To be the mother of a lass	H
Whose mind bore the brunt	V
Of a chemical imbalance in her brain	W
Oh What a shame it was	M
	-
In their neighbour s house the father weeps	N
Filled with sorrow and grief	O
His bipolar son accidentally had	P
Burnt his hand while cooking for a friend	Q
No nothing fatal But alas	H
That would have been better	F
His life was ruined he couldn t face society	R
How could he	R
For when wounds heal and scars fade	K
Fragile the mind and brain remain	W
The fact is he is mentally crippled	X
Oh what a shame it was	M
To be the father of a lad	P
Whose mind bore the brunt	V
Of a chemical imbalance in his brain	W
Oh What a shame it was	M
	-
The less confusing dimension	A
I m sure it sounds familiar	F
But the parallel dimension	A
To me it sounds confusing	E
To you too if it sounds ridiculous	D
Then tell me why	Y
Why show off your battle scars	Z
But hide the pain trauma and distress	A2
Why care for just your body	R
While neglecting your brain and mind	B2
And in doing so pride why do you find	B2
	-
Superficial wounds with ease they heal	C2
The deepest cuts they need more care and time	D2
Without attention they worsen	A
Over time turning into poison	A
That eats you from within	E2
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None of it is your fault	F2
It s nothing to be ashamed of	G2
unlike what they ve told you	H2
It s nothing that can t heal	C2
It s not irreparable damage	I2
It s a mere wound on your brain and mind	B2
	-
Now would you be so kind	B2
To let heal the battle wounds	J2
You had kept so well hidden	A
No not just the ones on your skin	E2
Also the ones on your brain and mind	B2

Krishnapriya Ramanathan

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