You Said Forever Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD AEFE GCHC IDJK DLEJ MNMN MOMJ

You said forever and I believed itA
I was so naive and so youngB
I gave my heart away so willinglyC
But I didn t know what I had doneD
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You said you loved me and I believed itA
I should have known betterE
But I was so mesmerized by your sweet wordsF
That I just couldn t let go neverE
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But for six years you liedG
Looking to find love in other men and not meC
My heart was broken I was hurtH
How could you do this to meC
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I gave you my heart my soulI
I thought you were the oneD
But I guess that you just told a lieJ
You didn t love me you were just aloneK
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My trust was betrayed my faith was brokenD
My dreams shattered with one heartless actL
You said you would love me foreverE
But for six years you lied why my love whyJ
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It s hard to believe that I was fooledM
That I was taken for a foolN
But I guess it was my naivetyM
That blinded me and I was a toolN
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You said forever and I believed itM
But for six years you lied craving other menO
And now I am left here with a broken heartM
Lost and alone why my love whyJ

Juan Steyn
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/08/2023

Poet's note: Words I remembered, words that cut deep. My first love, her first promise.




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