The Room Of Disappointment Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLM GGNN OOEE PPQQ RRHH STOO| Been sitting in this room wondering where I went wrong | A |
| These walls caving in and I'm struggling to breathe | B |
| How did I go from being a good kid | C |
| To disappointing my family so much | D |
| - | |
| I used to be the child with dreams in my eyes | E |
| A heart full of hope ready to touch the skies | E |
| But somewhere along the way I lost my way | F |
| Caught in a whirlwind of mistakes led astray | F |
| - | |
| I remember the days when laughter filled the air | G |
| Innocence embraced me without a single care | G |
| But now regret weighs heavy on my soul | H |
| As I navigate this darkness trying to regain control | H |
| - | |
| The choices I made oh how they haunt me now | I |
| Like ghosts from the past they refuse to allow | I |
| Me to forget the pain I've caused the tears I've shed | J |
| Leaving my loved ones questioning where I tread | J |
| - | |
| I see disappointment etched upon their faces | K |
| A reflection of my own self lost in empty spaces | K |
| How did I let it come to this I ask myself | L |
| As I search for answers trapped in this lonely cell | M |
| - | |
| But in this room amidst the chaos and despair | G |
| I find solace in the silence a moment to repair | G |
| To gather the shattered pieces of my broken heart and dreams | N |
| And stitch them together with resilience it seems | N |
| - | |
| For I am not defined by the mistakes I've made | O |
| Nor the disappointments that have left me frayed | O |
| I am a warrior a fighter ready to rise | E |
| From the ashes of my past where my spirit lies | E |
| - | |
| So I'll rise from this room with newfound strength | P |
| Embracing the journey no matter the length | P |
| I'll rebuild the bridges I've burned to the ground | Q |
| And prove to my friends and family love can still be found | Q |
| - | |
| Though the road may be long and the battles tough | R |
| I'll reclaim my worth and show them I've had enough | R |
| Enough of the darkness that once consumed my soul | H |
| It's time to rewrite my story and take back control | H |
| - | |
| So here I stand ready to face the dawn | S |
| With hope in my heart and resilience reborn | T |
| No longer defined by the mistakes I've made | O |
| I'll rise above the ashes unafraid | O |
Juan Steyn
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/08/2023
Poet's note: When the day gets long and I'm all alone. Seeing the disappointment on my parents faces, because of all the mistakes I've made in the past. I go to my room and pour out my soul on a piece of paper, wishing to feel better and smile again. So I wrote this poem for my friends and family asking them where I went wrong? But I also wrote it to myself asking my self where I went wrong, because lately, I feel like I used to be a good kid but now I'm questioning every decision I make and I'm just tired. So to whom ever feels the same way and can relate with this poem, this is also for you!
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