Lost In A Coma Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDCEFFGHICJJKFJ

Oh Elise I've called your name for a thousand nightsA
the moon as bright as your sparkling eyesB
I'd wait just gazing at the evening skyC
playing some musical tunesD
and just watch the time passing byC
suddenly feeling hazyE
is this reality or some spelling feelingF
awake or trapped in my own lucid dreamingF
a subtle and soothing voiceG
creeping closer and closerH
it's approach unbearableI
Elise I shouted but no replyC
slowly getting back to my sensesJ
I then came to realiseJ
I've fooled myself into thinking a beauty would come and relief my mindK
but enough time wastingF
it's truly time for me to open my eyesJ

Joshua Mouton
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/10/2020



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