Waking Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCABC AADDBC EEFCBC EGGHHI ABCJJI KLKMFM NIDDAB EDOPFELying beneath a hundred seas of sleep | A |
With all those heavy waves flowing over me | B |
And I unconscious of the rolling night | C |
Until slowly from deep to lesser deep | A |
Risen I felt the wandering seas no longer cover me | B |
But only air and light | C |
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It was a sleep | A |
So dark and so bewilderingly deep | A |
That only death's were deeper or completer | D |
And none when I awoke stranger or sweeter | D |
Awake the strangeness still hung over me | B |
As I with far strayed senses stared at the light | C |
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I and who was I | E |
Saw oh with what unaccustomed eye | E |
The room was strange and everything was strange | F |
Like a strange room entered by wild moonlight | C |
And yet familiar as the light swept over me | B |
And I rose from the night | C |
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Strange yet stranger I | E |
And as one climbs from water up to land | G |
Fumbling for weedy steps with foot and hand | G |
So I for yesterdays whereon to climb | H |
To this remote and new struck isle of time | H |
But I found not myself nor yesterday | I |
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Until slowly from deep to lesser deep | A |
Risen I felt the seas no longer over me | B |
But only air and light | C |
Yes like one clutching at a ring I heard | J |
The household noises as they stirred | J |
And holding fast I wondered What were they | I |
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I felt a strange hand lying at my side | K |
Limp and cool I touched it and knew it mine | L |
A murmur and I remembered how the wind died | K |
In the near aspens Then | M |
Strange things were no more strange | F |
I travelled among common thoughts again | M |
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And felt the new forged links of that strong chain | N |
That binds me to myself and this to day | I |
To yesterday I heard it rattling near | D |
With a no more astonished ear | D |
And I had lost the strangeness of that sleep | A |
No more the long night rolled its great seas over me | B |
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O too anxious I | E |
For in this press of things familiar | D |
I have lost all that clung | O |
Round me awaking of strangeness and such sweetness | P |
Nothing now is strange | F |
Except the man that woke and then was I | E |
John Freeman
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Katherine Novak: Are you the Freeman who taught Imaginative Writing, fall 1967, U of Ark., Fayetteville? You were my instructor. We were both in Jim Whitehead's poetry workshop spring 1968--I, as as an undergrad. You wrote droll phrases on my handouts, We snickered; Jim shot the baleful look. I like your poem.
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