The Dark Night Of The Mind Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABB CDECC DDEFDGGFHH IBJKKJBDLFM NNOP

I could not love if my thought loved not tooA
Nor could my body touch the body of youA
Unless first in the dark night of the mindB
Love had fulfilled what Love had well designedB
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Was it in thought or flesh we walked when lowC
The sun dropped and the white scar on the hillD
Sank into the dark treesE
Could we indeed so quietly goC
Body by body into that heavenly glowC
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The elms that rose so vast above the millD
Near leafless were and stillD
But from the branches with such loud uneaseE
Black flocking starlings mixed their warring criesF
That seemed the greater noise of the creaking millD
And every branch and extreme twig was blackG
With birds that whistled and heard and whistled backG
Filling with noise as late with wings the skiesF
Was it their noise we heardH
Or clamour of other thoughts in our quiet mind that stirredH
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Then through the climbing hazel hedge new thinnedI
By the early and rapacious windB
We saw the silver birches gleam with lightJ
Of frozen masts in seas all wild and greenK
O were they truly trees or some unseenK
Thought taking on an image dark and brightJ
And did those bodies see them or the mindB
And did those bodies face once more the hillD
To bathe in night or on a darker roadL
Our spirits unseeing unwearying rise and riseF
Where these feet never trodM
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From that familiar outer darkness IN
Would rise to the inner deeper darker skyN
And find you in my spirit or find you notO
O never never if not in my thoughtP

John Freeman



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