The Old Man's Visit Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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Joe lives on the farm and Sam lives in the cityA
I haven't a daughter at all more's the pityA
For girls to my mind are much nicer and neaterB
Not such workers as boys but cuter and sweeterB
Sam has prospered in town has riches a plentyA
Big house fine library books written by HentyA
And Kipling and Cooper and all those big writersC
Swell pictures and busts of great heroes and fightersC
His home is a fine one from cellar to garretA
But not to my notion in fact I can't bear itA
I'm not hard to please but of all things provokingD
Is a woman around who sniffs when you're smokingD
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Last springtime Sam said Now Father how is itA
I can't coax you oftener up on a visitA
I couldn't think up any plausible reasonE
So off I went with him to stop for a seasonE
Sam said with a laugh as we stepped from the ferryA
You won't mind my wife she's particular veryA
It wasn't like home that house in the cityA
Our Sam took his fun at the club more's the pityA
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It is in his own house when he has the leisureB
A man should find comfort and freedom and pleasureB
It wasn't so bad for me in the daytimeF
Sam took me all over and made it a playtimeF
But evenings were awful we sat there so properB
While Sam's wife if nobody came in to stop herB
Read history to us or column by columnG
A housekeeping journal or other dry volumeF
I used to wish someone would give me a proddingD
My eyes would go shut and head fall a noddingD
She's an awful good housewife nothing gets mustyA
Or littered about or untidy or dustyA
But a little disorder never did fret meA
And these perfect women they always upset meA
I can stand her dusting her shining her pokingD
But wilt like a leaf when she sniffs when I'm smokingD
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I got so blamed homesick I couldn't be jollyA
I wanted our Joe and his little wife MollyA
My old corner at home and all the old placesH
I wanted the youngsters who cared if their facesH
Were smeared up a trifle I didn't a pennyA
Molly tends to 'em though she has so manyA
I was tickled to death when I got a letterB
From Joe which ran Dear Dad I think you had betterB
Get back to the farm in pretty short orderB
Molly's papered your room and put on a borderB
The baby she says has two new teeth to show youI
If you don't hustle back the dear thing won't know youI
She says to inform you that Bob Sue and MaryA
Are good as can be but your namesake's contraryA
Wants granddaddy's story and granddaddy's dittyA
And granddaddy off on a trot to the cityA
I packed my belongings They tried to dissuade meA
Sam's wife said so proper I'm really afraid weA
Have not succeeded in our entertainingD
Oh yes said I some things won't stand much explainingD
She really meant well but of all things provokingD
Is a woman so perfect she sniffs when you're smokingD
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I was glad to get home it made me quite sillyA
To hear the loud whinny of Starling and BillyA
And here was the farm with its orchards and meadowsJ
The big maple trees all throwing their shadowsJ
The stubble fields yellow the tall stacks of cloverB
The wag of the stub of a tail on old RoverB
And here came dear Mary her hat on her shoulderB
With Sue trying hard to catch her and hold herB
Here came Tommy and Joe always foot in their classesH
And Bob with his features all crumbs and molassesH
Carrying a basin with fishworms and dirt inK
Oh that scalawag Bob I'm morally certainE
Is a chip of the old block it just seemed to strike meA
They'd named the boy rightly for he was so like meA
All laughing and calling Here's grandpa to play withL
And Bob supplementing And sleep 'ith and stay 'ithL
And then such a hugging with Molly behind meA
The tears came so fast that they threatened to blind meA
My heart overflowed with sorrow and pityA
For the boy I had left back there in the cityA
His lot is a hard one indeed I'm not jokingD
He lives with a woman who sniffs when he's smokingD
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The supper we had sir and when it was overB
The walk round the homestead close followed by RoverB
Who's most like a human You'd fancy him sayingD
See those stacks Oh yes we have finished the hayingD
That colt should be broken Old friend I'd just mentionE
This farm stands in need of our closest attentionE
And when the lamp lighted with Mary's beside meA
The boys at my feet and Bob up astride meA
I felt like a king I really can't write itA
Molly must take my pipe and fill it and light itA
Then plump herself down in her own little rockerB
For a visit with me Oh she is a talkerB
Worth the listening to The threshing was overB
Joe had got ten dollars a ton for the cloverB
Deacon Hope had had a sharp tiff with the preacherB
Over immersion and the pretty school teacherB
Intended to marry resigned her positionE
Yes most of the church folks had signed the petitionE
Against granting a license to Baker's saloonM
The Thanksgiving service would be coming on soonM
The neighbors were hearty had every one missed meA
Right here Molly stood on her tip toes and kissed meA
Sho Sam's wife is handsome and cultured and cleverB
But she's not the woman that Molly is neverB
Molly's smile is so kind and her hair is so glossyA
Her brown eyes look at you so sweet and so saucyA
Yes Joe's richer than Sam though Joe's but a farmerB
For his home atmosphere is brighter and warmerB
Sam has lots of money there's no use denyingD
Has made himself wealthy and that without tryingD
But what chance has a man indeed I'm not jokingD
Who lives with a woman who sniffs when he's smokingD

Jean Blewett



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