Strange? Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EF GHIAD JFG

Strange was the feeling that invaded my body the first time I laid eyes on youA
I still remember this sensation which shook my whole body to render my helplessness this helplessness so powerful that when our gazes met my eyes were drawn into yoursB
The feeling that at this moment the world stops to look at us as if destiny had chosen us and seemed as it said that our love would last a lifetimeC
My heart once calm becomes a spark and in this silent moment when our gazes met our love fadedD
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As time passed on I guess destiny was wrong in my world which was once a song I felt lost because you were now goneE
I wish my heart would let me move on but it still beats to the rhythm of our songF
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StrangeG
Strange was the feeling that invaded my body when I saw how your eyes lit up when you saw herH
I still remember this sensation which shook my whole body to render my helplessness this helplessness so powerful that made me feel empty and betrayedI
The feeling that at this moment the world stops as I realise the person who I once loved dearly and kept all my secrets was gone tooA
My heart once sparked breaks and in this silent moment with neither you nor my best friend love endedD
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As time passed on I tried to forgive what was done in my world in which I now feel numbJ
I wish I had a gun to silence the loud drum which still beats to the rhythm of our songF
Why was I so dumb StrangeG

Gem Branders
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/08/2024

Poet's note: This poem is about how I loved this one boy so dearly and I believed he felt the same way then all of a sudden he fell for my best friend and she fell too.




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