Young Benjie Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A B C D EFGF HIJI KLGM NIOI G DP QIRI GSG JIP T LP JSRU V V V V WEVX SKO OHOY OZOZ ZPO A2UO ZSU B2SUS SUC2U OUZ

The Text is given from Scott's Minstrelsy He remarks 'The ballad is given from tradition ' No in the Abbotsford MS 'Scotch Ballads Materials for Border Minstrelsy ' is Young Benjie or Boonjie as there written in thirteen stanzas headed 'From Jean Scott ' and written in William Laidlaw's hand All of this except the first stanza is transferred with or without changes to Scott's ballad which is nearly twice as longA
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The Story of this ballad simple in itself introduces to us the elaborate question of the 'lyke wake ' or the practice of watching through the night by the side of a corpse More about this will be found under The Lyke Wake Dirge and in the Appendix at the end of this volume Here it will suffice to quote Sir Walter Scott's introductionB
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'In this ballad the reader will find traces of a singular superstition not yet altogether discredited in the wilder parts of Scotland The lykewake or watching a dead body in itself a melancholy office is rendered in the idea of the assistants more dismally awful by the mysterious horrors of superstition In the interval betwixt death and interment the disembodied spirit is supposed to hover around its mortal habitation and if provoked by certain rites retains the power of communicating through its organs the cause of its dissolution Such enquiries however are always dangerous and never to be resorted to unless the deceased is suspected to have suffered foul play as it is called One of the most potent ceremonies in the charm for causing the dead body to speak is setting the door ajar or half open On this account the peasants of Scotland sedulously avoid leaving the door ajar while a corpse lies in the house The door must either be left wide open or quite shut but the first is always preferred on account of the exercise of hospitality usual on such occasions The attendants must be likewise careful never to leave the corpse for a moment alone or if it is left alone to avoid with a degree of superstitious horror the first sight of it ' Ed vol iii ppC
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YOUNG BENJIED
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Of a' the maids o' fair ScotlandE
The fairest was MarjorieF
And young Benjie was her ae true loveG
And a dear true love was heF
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And wow but they were lovers dearH
And loved fu' constantlieI
But ay the mair when they fell outJ
The sairer was their pleaI
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And they hae quarrelled on a dayK
Till Marjorie's heart grew waeL
And she said she'd chuse another luveG
And let young Benjie gaeM
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And he was stout and proud heartedN
And thought o't bitterlieI
And he's gaen by the wan moon lightO
To meet his MarjorieI
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'O open open my true loveG
O open and let me in '-
'I dare na open young BenjieD
My three brothers are withinP
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'Ye lied ye lied my bonny burdQ
Sae loud's I hear ye lieI
As I came by the Lowden banksR
They bade gude e'en to meI
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'But fare ye weel my ae fause loveG
That I hae loved sae langS
It sets ye chuse another loveG
And let young Benjie gang '-
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Then Marjorie turned her round aboutJ
The tear blinding her eeI
'I darena darena let thee inP
But I'll come down to thee '-
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Then saft she smiled and said to himT
'O what ill hae I done '-
He took her in his armis twaL
And threw her o'er the linnP
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The stream was strang the maid was stoutJ
And laith laith to be dangS
But ere she wan the Lowden banksR
Her fair colour was wanU
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Then up bespak her eldest brotherV
'O see na ye what I see '-
And out then spak her second brotherV
'It's our sister Marjorie '-
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Out then spak her eldest brotherV
'O how shall we her ken '-
And out then spak her youngest brotherV
'There's a honey mark on her chin '-
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Then they've ta'en up the comely corpseW
And laid it on the grundE
'O wha has killed our ae sisterV
And how can he be foundX
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'The night it is her low lykewakeS
The morn her burial dayK
And we maun watch at mirk midnightO
And hear what she will say '-
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Wi' doors ajar and candle lightO
And torches burning clearH
The streikit corpse till still midnightO
They waked but naething hearY
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About the middle o' the nightO
The cocks began to crawZ
And at the dead hour o' the nightO
The corpse began to thrawZ
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'O wha has done the wrang sisterZ
Or dared the deadly sinP
Wha was sae stout and feared nae doutO
As thraw ye o'er the linn '-
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'Young Benjie was the first ae manA2
I laid my love uponU
He was sae stout and proud heartedO
He threw me o'er the linn '-
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'Sall we young Benjie head sisterZ
Sall we young Benjie hangS
Or sall we pike out his twa gray eenU
And punish him ere he gang '-
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'Ye mauna Benjie head brothersB2
Ye mauna Benjie hangS
But ye maun pike out his twa gray eenU
And punish him ere he gangS
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'Tie a green gravat round his neckS
And lead him out and inU
And the best ae servant about your houseC2
To wait young Benjie onU
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'And ay at every seven years' endO
Ye'll tak him to the linnU
For that's the penance he maun drieZ
To scug his deadly sin '-

Frank Sidgwick



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