Clyde's Water Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A B C D E F G CEC HHC GIC JHK GIC HHL MNGN GOP IIII CIPHG CIQ JHL CRI PSILH GHG H LL HIGI IIII LLLL

The Text is from the Skene MS but I have omitted the three final lines which do not make a complete stanza and when compared with Scott's 'Old Lady's' version are obviously corrupt The last verse should signify that the mothers of Willie and Meggie went up and down the bank saying 'Clyde's water has done us wrong 'A
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The ballad is better known as Willie and May MargaretB
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The Story Willie refuses his mother's request to stay at home as he wishes to visit his true love The mother puts her malison or curse upon him but he rides off Clyde is roaring but Willie says 'Drown me as I come back but spare me as I go ' which is Martial'sC
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'Parcite dum propero mergite cum redeo '-
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and occurs in other English broadsides Meggie will not admit Willie and he rides away Meggie awakes and learns that she has dismissed her true love in her sleep Our ballad is deficient here but it is obvious from st that both lovers are drowned We must understand therefore that Meggie follows Willie across Clyde A variant of the ballad explains that she found him 'in the deepest pot' in all Clyde's water and drowned herselfD
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Child notes that there is a very popular Italian ballad of much the same story except that the mother's curse is on the girl and not the manE
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There is a curious change in the style of spelling from stanza to the endF
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CLYDE'S WATERG
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'Ye gie corn unto my horseC
An' meat unto my manE
For I will gae to my true love's gatesC
This night gin that I can '-
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'O stay at hame this ae night WillieH
This ae bare night wi' meH
The best bed in a' my houseC
Sall be well made to thee '-
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'I carena for your beds mitherG
I carena ae pinI
For I'll gae to my love's gatesC
This night gin I can win '-
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'O stay my son Willie this nightJ
This ae night wi' meH
The best hen in a' my roostK
Sall be well made ready for thee '-
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'I carena for your hens mitherG
I carena ae pinI
I sall gae to my love's gatesC
This night gin I can win '-
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'Gin ye winna stay my son WillieH
This ae bare night wi' meH
Gin Clyde's water be deep and fu' o' floodL
My malisen drown ye '-
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He rode up yon high hillM
An' down yon dowie glenN
The roaring o' Clyde's waterG
Wad hae fleyt ten thousand menN
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'O spare me Clyde's waterG
O spare me as I gaeO
Mak me your wrack as I come backP
But spare me as I gae '-
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He rade in and farther inI
Till he came to the chinI
And he rade in and farther inI
Till he came to dry lan'I
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And whan he came to his love's gatesC
He tirled at the pinI
'Open your gates MeggieP
Open your gates to meH
For my beets are fu' o' Clyde's waterG
And the rain rains oure my chin '-
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'I hae nae lovers therout ' she saysC
'I hae nae love withinI
My true love is in my arms twaQ
An' nane will I lat in '-
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'Open your gates Meggie this ae nightJ
Open your gates to meH
For Clyde's water is fu' o' floodL
An' my mither's malison'll drown me '-
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'Ane o' my chamers is fu' o' corn ' she saysC
'An' ane is fu' o' hayR
Anither is fu' o' gentlemenI
An' they winna move till day '-
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Out waked her May MeggieP
Out o' her drousy dreamS
'I dreamed a dream sin the yestreenI
God read a' dreams to guidL
That my true love WillieH
Was standing at my bed feet '-
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'Now lay ye still my ae dochterG
An' keep my back fra the call'H
For it's na the space of hafe an hourG
Sen he gad fra yer hall' '-
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'An' hey Willie an' hoa WillieH
Winne ye turn agen '-
But ay the louder that she crayedL
He rod agenst the windL
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He rod up yon high hillH
An' doun yon douey denI
The roring that was in Clide's waterG
Wad ha' flayed ten thousand menI
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He road in an' farder inI
Till he came to the chineI
An' he road in an' farder inI
Bat never mare was seenI
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Ther was na mare seen of that guid lordL
Bat his hat frae his headL
There was na mare seen of that ladyL
Bat her comb an' her sneedL
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Frank Sidgwick



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