Venice, November, 1966 Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AAAB CDEFA GAHIABA AAAAJ AKDLAMAAAAAWith his head full of Shakespearean tempests | A |
and old notions of poetic justice | A |
he was ready with his elegies | A |
the day the ocean sailed into the square | B |
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'The sea ' he wrote 'is a forgiving element | C |
and history only the old odor of blood | D |
She will come to rest on the soft floor | E |
of the world barnacled like a great pirate ship | F |
and blind fish mouthing like girls before a glass | A |
will bump perhaps San Marco's brittle bones ' | - |
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Pleased with these images he paused | G |
and conjured visions of a wet apocalypse | A |
the blown church bobbing like a monstrous water toy | H |
Doge Dandolo's bronze horses from Byzantium | I |
pawing the black waves incredulous pigeons | A |
hovering like gulls over the drowning square | B |
mosaic saints floating gently to pieces | A |
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Then he waited as the wind rose as gondoliers | A |
were rocking in the long furrows of their boats | A |
and small waves licked the marble lions' eyes | A |
But still this most improbable of cities | A |
hung on lewdly enjoying her own smell | J |
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Learning later how Florence with her brown bells | A |
her dried up joke of a river had played | K |
the ark to all his fantasies of flood | D |
he felt a little foolish He was walking | L |
in the gallery then thinking of the doges | A |
how they tread on clouds which puff and pucker | M |
like the flesh of their fat Venetian whores | A |
how thanks to Tintoretto's shrewd old eyes | A |
they saw themselves amid the holy saints | A |
how shrewd old Tintoretto for a price | A |
painted his patrons into paradise | A |
Erica Jong
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