Venice, November, 1966 Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AAAB CDEFA GAHIABA AAAAJ AKDLAMAAAAA

With his head full of Shakespearean tempestsA
and old notions of poetic justiceA
he was ready with his elegiesA
the day the ocean sailed into the squareB
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'The sea ' he wrote 'is a forgiving elementC
and history only the old odor of bloodD
She will come to rest on the soft floorE
of the world barnacled like a great pirate shipF
and blind fish mouthing like girls before a glassA
will bump perhaps San Marco's brittle bones '-
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Pleased with these images he pausedG
and conjured visions of a wet apocalypseA
the blown church bobbing like a monstrous water toyH
Doge Dandolo's bronze horses from ByzantiumI
pawing the black waves incredulous pigeonsA
hovering like gulls over the drowning squareB
mosaic saints floating gently to piecesA
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Then he waited as the wind rose as gondoliersA
were rocking in the long furrows of their boatsA
and small waves licked the marble lions' eyesA
But still this most improbable of citiesA
hung on lewdly enjoying her own smellJ
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Learning later how Florence with her brown bellsA
her dried up joke of a river had playedK
the ark to all his fantasies of floodD
he felt a little foolish He was walkingL
in the gallery then thinking of the dogesA
how they tread on clouds which puff and puckerM
like the flesh of their fat Venetian whoresA
how thanks to Tintoretto's shrewd old eyesA
they saw themselves amid the holy saintsA
how shrewd old Tintoretto for a priceA
painted his patrons into paradiseA

Erica Jong



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