The Long Tunnel Of Wanting You Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGEHIJKGLMGNJJO A| This is the long tunnel of wanting you | A |
| Its walls are lined with remembered kisses | B |
| wet red as the inside of your mouth | C |
| full juicy as your probing tongue | D |
| warm as your belly against mine | E |
| deep as your navel leading home | F |
| soft as your sleeping cock beginning to stir | G |
| tight as your legs wrapped around mine | E |
| straight as your toes pointing toward the bed | H |
| as you roll over thrust your hardness | I |
| into the long tunnel of my wanting | J |
| seeding it with dreams unbearable hope | K |
| making memories of the future | G |
| straightening out my crooked past | L |
| teaching me to live in the present present tense | M |
| with the past perfect and the uncertain future | G |
| suddenly certain for certain | N |
| in the long tunnel of my old wanting | J |
| which before always had an ending | J |
| but now begins begins again | O |
| with you with you with you | A |
Erica Jong
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