Because I Would Not Admit Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEF GHIJDKL MNOPQRIS TUTVWVXYZA2IKB2 C2D2WE2F2IG2H2I2 J2K2J2L2RM2N2O2P2Q2 VR2VS2T2U2V2W2X2 Y2IW2F2And his dark secret love | A |
Does thy life destroy | B |
William Blake | C |
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Because I would not admit | D |
that I had nurtured | E |
an enemy within my breast | F |
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a lover who wanted to gnaw | G |
my secret rose | H |
a lover who wanted to press me | I |
between the covers of a book | J |
then burn it | D |
a lover usurper who wanted | K |
to take my soul | L |
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I nearly died | M |
running my car upon rocks | N |
like a badly steered sloop | O |
crashing into trees | P |
like a hurricane gale | Q |
burning my arms in ovens | R |
when I thought I was only | I |
baking bread | S |
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To admit the betrayal | T |
was worse than | U |
the fact of betrayal | T |
for I loved him | V |
as leaves love sun | W |
turning my face to him | V |
turning my hips my womb | X |
to be filled with a dream | Y |
of children a dream of books | Z |
babies sprouting like leaves | A2 |
from a spring tree | I |
a dream of trees that leaked blood | K |
instead of sap | B2 |
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The dream s the thing | C2 |
the dream we die for | D2 |
turning our faces to the sun | W |
eyes closed never seeing it has | E2 |
gone out | F2 |
dead star it blazes coldly | I |
over a dead planet | G2 |
while we bask in its afterglow | H2 |
now remembered in the mind | I2 |
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He was fond | J2 |
of stars telescopes | K2 |
fond of machines fond | J2 |
of building the most complex | L2 |
contraptions | R |
to scale the clouds | M2 |
But Icarus flies | N2 |
near the sun with waxen wings | O2 |
does not think of gears | P2 |
or motors | Q2 |
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Trees rise up at him | V |
as he falls the earth | R2 |
rushes to meet him | V |
like a lover | S2 |
raising her writhing hips | T2 |
the wings weep their waxy tears | U2 |
fall apart | V2 |
the sun is hot | W2 |
on his face | X2 |
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But even as he falls | Y2 |
he is in ecstasy | I |
his sun has not | W2 |
gone out | F2 |
Erica Jong
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