When They Draw Us Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEF GBHIJI

When they draw us the childrenA
as great beaming sun facesB
balanced on sticks waving sticksC
can it be that they see us so soonD
with a clarity we believeE
comes only with ageF
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They draw us outG
of ourselves our trembling palacesB
into the fragile worldsH
they play dream fear into beingI
as if they know even nowJ
we will be goingI

Eric Torgersen



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