A Vacation Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDBBEFGH IGBJBKLB MNMOPPQO OC OB RBSBBFT

On the streets of M rida beggars and vendorsA
of shirts and hammocks and panama hatsB
We perfect our no But there's always somethingC
we can't help saying yes to I want to joinD
these men on holiday on the ferry to Isla MujeresB
laughing and teasing knocking off one another's hatsB
Each lays his head on the shoulder of the nextE
and they sleep a while together in a rowF
Then they wake up and laugh and tease some moreG
pour water on the one who turns his backH
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At Chich n Itz it's the cenote the hugeI
natural well they must have built the city forG
Books tell us all we need about the buildingsB
the almost fascist inhuman Toltec grandeurJ
of the space there but what can a book sayB
about the cenote which no one builtK
I want to stay thereL
On a clear night it would hold a lot of starsB
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A lovely young girl is screaming mama and papaM
on the ball court Mama and papa are cultured and richN
and their daughter's lovely name is Le ti ci aM
She'll grow up a beauty but she's only eightO
years old now and everyone still loves herP
She throws rocks at her pensive well behaved older brotherP
Next year mama will make her keep her shirt onQ
The book says that virgins were thrown into the cenoteO
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A bus in the ditch and a semi truck on its sideO
that blocks the whole road burningC
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I dream in our house on the prairie we're surroundedO
by Indians It's her fault they've crept up so closeB
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But when I dream a madman wants to kill meR
leaves weird notes and drives his busB
full of bizarre electronics across the lawnS
when he's got me on the bus and grabs a big axeB
and we wrestle and I dig my fingers into his faceB
it's the face of a neighbor at home I hardly knowF
who came to the door once with liquor on his breath to talkT

Eric Torgersen



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