Mud Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABAB CDCD EFGF HIHI JKJK LMLM NONO JFJF PQPQ RSRS TTTB NCNC

This war's a waste of slurry and its atmosphere is mudA
All is bog from here to sunset Wadin' throughB
We're the victims of a thicker sort of universal floodA
With discomforts that old Noah never knewB
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We have dubbed our trench The Cecil There's a brass plate and a domeC
And a quagmire where the doormat used to beD
If you're calling second Tuesday is our reg'lar day at homeC
So delighted if you'll toddle in to teaD
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There is mud along the corridors enough to bog a cowE
In the air there hangs a musty kind of woofF
There's a frog pond in the parlour and the kitchen is a sloughG
She has neither doors nor windows nor a roofF
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When they post our bald somnambulist as missing from his flatH
We take soundings for the digger with a propI
By the day the board is gratis by the week it's half of thatH
For the season there's a corresponding dropI
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Opening off the spacious hallway is my natty little suiteJ
A commodious and accessible abodeK
By judicious disposition with exclusion of my feetJ
There is sleeping room for Oliver the toadK
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Though the ventilation's gusty and in gobs the ceiling fallsL
Which with oral respiration disagreesM
Though there comes a certain quantity of seepage from the wallsL
There are some I knew in diggings worse than theseM
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On my right is Cobber Carkeek There's a spring above his headN
And his mattress is a special kind of clayO
He's a most punctilious bloke about the fashion of his bedN
And he makes it with a shovel every dayO
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Man is dust If so the Cobber has been puddled up a treatJ
On domestic sanitation he's a toffF
For he lights a fire on Sunday bakes his surface in the heatJ
Then he takes a little maul and cracks it offF
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After hanging out a winter in this Cimmerian holeP
We're forgetting sheets and baths and tidy skinsQ
In the dark and deadly calm last night they took us on patrolP
Seven little fellows thinking of their sinsQ
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It was ours like blinded snails to prowl the soggy slimy nightR
With a feeler pricking out at every poreS
For the death that stalks in darkness or the blinking stab of lightR
And the other trifling matters that are warS
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That's the stuff to get your liver that's the acid on a manT
For it tries his hones and seeks his marrow thronghT
You have got the thought to comfort you that life is but a spanT
If Fritz squirts his loathly limelight over youB
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We got back again at daybreak Cobber ducked to doss and saidN
From the soft embracing mud No more I'll roamC
Oh thank Heaven blokes he murmured for the comforts of a bedN
Gorstruth but ain't it good to have a homeC

Edward Dyson



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