Bricks Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABB CDCDD EFEFF GHGHH IJIJJ KCKCC LMLMM NONOO PQPQQ RSRSS MTMTT UVUVV WXWXX

Dear Ned I now take up my pen to write you these few linesA
And hopin' how they find you fit Gorbli' it seems an ageB
Since Jumbo ducked the Port 'n' drilled 'n' polished to the ninesA
He walked his pork on Collins like a hero off the stageB
Then hiked a rifle 'cross the sea this bleedin' war to wageB
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The things what's 'appened lately calls to Jumbo's mind that dayC
Our push took on the Peewee pack 'n' belted out their lardD
With twenty cops to top it off But now I'm stowed awayC
A bullet in me gizzard where I took it good and hardD
A dealin' stoush 'n' mullock to the Prussian flamin' GuardD
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At Bullcoor mortal charnce had dumped a mutton truck of usE
From good ole Port ker flummox where we didn't orter beF
All in a 'elpless hole the Pug Bill Carkeek Son 'n' GusE
Don Steve 'n' Jack 'n' seven more 'n' as it 'appens meF
With nothin' in since breakfast 'n' a week to go for teaF
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Worked loose from Caddy's bunch we went it gay until we foundG
We'd took to 'arf the ragin' German Hempire on our ownH
Then down we went so 'umble with our noses in the groundG
Takin' cover in the rubble If a German head was shownH
It was fare the well to Herman with a bullet through the boneH
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We slogged the cows remorseless 'n' they laid for us a treatI
We held that stinkin' cellar though 'n' when the day was doneJ
Son pussied on his bingie where a Maxie trim 'n' neatI
Had spit out loaded lightnin' and he slugged a tubby HunJ
Then choked a Fritzie with his dukes 'n' pinched the sooner's gunJ
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We rigged her on her knuckle bones Cri' how she lapped 'em upK
We hosed 'em out with livin' lead That was the second dayC
Me left eye I'd 'ave give for jest a bubble in a cupK
Three fingers I'd 'ave parted for a bone I've flung awayC
But the butcher wasn't callin' 'n' the fountain didn't playC
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T'was rotten mozzle Neddo We had blown out ever clipL
'N' 'blooed the hammunition for the little box of tricksM
Each took a batten in his fist Sez Billy Let 'er ripL
But Son he claws his stubble Sez he Hold a brace of ticksM
Then Yow he pipes 'n' Strewth he sez it's bricks you blighters bricksM
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There's more than 'arf a million spilt where somethin' hit a pubN
We creeps among 'n' sorts 'em stack afore 'n' stack behindO
The Hun is comin' at us with his napper like a tubN
You couldn't 'ope to miss it pickled paralysed 'n' blindO
Sez Sonny Lay 'em open Give 'em blotches on the rindO
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Then bricks was flyin' in the wind Mine dinted Otto's chinP
Ole Nosey got his brother which he never more will roamQ
When Ulrich stopped a Port bookay he rolled his alley inP
Their fire was somethin' fierce Poor Son was blowin' blood 'n' foamQ
Fill up he coughs 'n' plug 'em S'elp me Gord we're goin' 'omeQ
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With bricks we drove right at 'em 'n' we wanged 'em best we couldR
'Twas either bed 'n' breakfast or a scribble and a wreathS
Haynes bust a Prussian's almond took the bay'net where he stoodR
Then heaved his last 'arf Brunswick split the demon's grinnin' teethS
And Son went down in glory with a German underneathS
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We'd started out with gibbers in our clobber and our 'atsM
They gave us floatin' lead enough to stop an army corT
We yelled like fiends 'n' countered with a lovely flight of batsM
Then rushed in close formation heavin' cot tages n' toreT
Through blinded bleedin' Bosches 'n' lor love yeh it was warT
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We came peltin' headfirst 'elpless in a drain among a lotU
Of dirty damned old Tommies Gord The best that ever blewV
Eight left of us all punctured each man holdin' what he'd gotU
Me wild a rat hole in me lung but in me mauley tooV
A bull nosed brick with whiskers where no whiskers ever grewV
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There's nothin' doin' now I wear me blan kets like a toffW
The way this fat nurse pets me strewth it's well to be so sickX
A dreamin' of our contract 'n' the way we pulled it offW
I reckon Haig is phonin' Hughes Hullo there Billy QuickX
A dozen of the pushes and a thousan' tons of brickX

Edward Dyson



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