My Skeleton, My Rival Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE FGHI JKLAMNFO PQRSGTUMVWXYVZA2B QB2C2QQAQFD2E2QAF2Interesting that I have to live with my skeleton | A |
It stands prepared to emerge and I carry it | B |
with me this other thing I will become at death | C |
and yet it keeps me erect and limber in my walk | D |
my rival | E |
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What will the living see of me | F |
if they should open my grave but my bones | G |
that will stare at them through hollow sockets | H |
and bared teeth | I |
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I write this to warn my friends | J |
not to be shocked at my changed attitude | K |
toward them but to be aware | L |
that I have it in me to be someone | A |
other than I am and I write to ask forgiveness | M |
that death is not wholesome for friendships | N |
that bones do not talk have no quarrel with me | F |
do not even know I exist | O |
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A machine called skeleton will take my place | P |
in the minds of others when I am dead | Q |
among the living and that machine | R |
will make it obvious that I have died | S |
to be identified by bones | G |
that have no speech no thought no mind | T |
to speak of having let themselves be carried | U |
once around in me as at my service | M |
at the podium or as I lay beside my love | V |
or when I held my child at birth | W |
or embraced a friend or shook a critic's hand | X |
or held a pen to sign a check or book | Y |
or wrote a farewell letter to a love | V |
or held my penis at the bowl | Z |
or lay my hand upon my face at the mirror | A2 |
and approved of it | B |
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There is Ignatow it will be said | Q |
looking down inside the open grave | B2 |
I'll be somewhere in my poems I think | C2 |
to be mistaken for my bones but There's Ignatow | Q |
will be said I say to those who persist | Q |
just read what I have written | A |
I'll be there held together by another kind | Q |
of structure of thought and imagery | F |
mind and matter love and longing tensions | D2 |
opposite such as the skeleton requires | E2 |
to stand upright to move with speed | Q |
to sit with confidence my friend the skeleton | A |
and I its friend shielding it from harm | F2 |
David Ignatow
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